People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
People often take decisions under different circumstances. The prompt suggests that without taking under consideration, things that might happen as consequences, one should never undertake risky action. In my opinion, I mostly agree with this suggestion and argue that people should always consider the possible implications of a risky action in most of the cases.
Human life is unpredictable and so is human activities. One can never predict what he might end up being or doing under different conditions. In every aspect of life, one has to take decision on various kind of topics. From the choice of a primary school to the choice of a suitable place to spend the last few days of a man's life, one has to make decisions.
One tends to make different choices in his life based on his personal and social betterment. For instance, in the time of making choices about one's profession, he generally prioritizes his passion and comfort zone as well as his natural talents. Sometimes natural inclination to a specific work conflicts with the preference of most people. In Bangladesh, about 80% high school graduates tend to take engineering of medical science as their profession. Given to the fact that engineering and medical science can be a good source of income, most parents in Bangladesh want their children to be either one of them even if their children might not be interested in neither of them. In this circumstances, if a student favors a relatively 'cold' job market subject, he or she should consider the consequences. The student may go for his or her passion but he or she must keep in mind that this risky decision may hamper his or her future.
On the other hand, sometimes situations demand taking risky decisions. For instance, if someone's kith and keen is in critical life condition as a result of suffering from an almost irrecoverable disease, one might have to take a bold step about undergoing an operation that can potentially take the patient's life. At that moment it's almost impossible to think about the outcome of the operation and reconsider the risky action of performing an operation. The operation might be very costly for the family but they will always try to leave no stone unturned.
However, in most of the cases, people think of the outcome before doing some risky tasks. A businessman will always observe carefully the present market condition of a specific product before making any investment in that product's industry. He will analyze the statistical data related to the product and based on the fact that whether this product will be beneficial for him or not will ultimately be the key thing behind his investment.
A step once taken can not be held back. So everyone should be very chary of making any kind of risky move and should always look for possible diverse effects of the move. Though it's tough to consider the outcomes of a decision in time of crisis, one should never be too hasty about making the most important choices of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 144, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ce, in the time of making choices about ones profession, he generally prioritizes hi...
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Line 11, column 296, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'conflict'?
Suggestion: conflict
... natural inclination to a specific work conflicts with the preference of most people. In ...
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Line 11, column 683, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ot be interested in neither of them. In this circumstances, if a student favors a re...
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Line 15, column 300, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
...operation that can potentially take the patients life. At that moment its almost impossi...
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Line 19, column 223, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
...ct before making any investment in that products industry. He will analyze the statistic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, well, as to, for instance, kind of, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2505.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 510.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91176470588 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72034286122 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482352941176 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 790.2 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3672450607 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.375 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127571675936 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410881581915 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391836852735 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770358865271 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585982651374 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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