The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every effort must be made to return them to their country of origin."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The premise states that as illegal immigrants are considered to be threats in various respects, to preserve the autonomy of a
country, preventing illegal immigrants from entering is the most important thing to be focused on. This statement may primarily seem
to be logical but it can not be ignored that they may remain some hidden reasons needed to be evaluated to reach such conclusion.
Accoding to me, the statement falls apart for three reasons.
First of all, it should be taken into account that why immigrants are trying to enter the country illegally? There is nothing stated
about the reasons behind the attempts of the immigrants' illegal entry. May be they are deliberately trying to willfully take such
audacious step in search of work for a better livelihood which their native country is unable to provide them with. If the scenario
is such, it is possible to have a greater benefit without hampering the autonomy of the country by simply taking the immigrants under
some laws and providing them with training on a few practical jobs to make the best output from them. Thus, the effort and potential
of these illegal immigrants can be utilized to improve the economy of the country.
Secondly, the reason behind the foolhardy step of entering a country illegally can be even more crucial. If the immgrants fail to
have a guarantee of safe lives in their own country, they may take the risk of tracepassing the border of another country as it may
seem the only possible way of saving their lives. In such conditions priority need to be given to humanity than any other concerns.
In the recent years, Rohingya people faced brutal service in their own native region. Their houses were set on fire, people were
killed brutally, women were raped. So the people deliberately took the audacious step to leave Myanmer with the hope of having a
secured and safe life for their family. They set out to cross the Naaf river instead of being well aware of all possible risks. From
such examples we can come to a conclusion that people trying to enter a country illegally may not always have the intention to cause
destruction.
Additionally, the statement has assumed straight that only the illegal immigrants are the main danger of economoy and national
identity. But there may be other potential factors to call the economy of a country in danger. Reasons such as increasing illiteracy
rate, unemplyment rate etc are responsible for the destruction of economy of a country.
From the discussion above, the conclusion can be driven that illegal immigrants may not always cause harm rather it may also be
possible to achieve fruitful outcome by properly utilizing their potentials and willpower.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...untry illegally? There is nothing stated about the reasons behind the attempts of...
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...llegally? There is nothing stated about the reasons behind the attempts of the ...
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...tempts of the immigrants illegal entry. May be they are deliberately trying to willful...
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...liberately trying to willfully take such audacious step in search of work for a b...
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...country is unable to provide them with. If the scenario is such, it is possi...
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...le to provide them with. If the scenario is such, it is possible to have a greate...
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...ry by simply taking the immigrants under some laws and providing them with traini...
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...imply taking the immigrants under some laws and providing them with training o...
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...rom them. Thus, the effort and potential of these illegal immigrants can be utili...
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...try illegally can be even more crucial. If the immgrants fail to have a guar...
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...n more crucial. If the immgrants fail to have a guarantee of safe lives in their ...
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... the border of another country as it may seem the only possible way of saving the...
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...rder of another country as it may seem the only possible way of saving their l...
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...eir houses were set on fire, people were killed brutally, women were raped. So th...
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...ses were set on fire, people were killed brutally, women were raped. So the peop...
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... leave Myanmer with the hope of having a secured and safe life for their family. ...
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...Myanmer with the hope of having a secured and safe life for their family. They se...
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...g well aware of all possible risks. From such examples we can come to a conclusio...
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...y not always have the intention to cause destruction. Additionally, the s...
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...the main danger of economoy and national identity. But there may be other potenti...
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... always cause harm rather it may also be possible to achieve fruitful outcome by ...
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... cause harm rather it may also be possible to achieve fruitful outcome by properly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 456.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1951754386 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61362203112 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506578947368 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.435616128 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.45 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.97078651685 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266673194756 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919850736077 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706322488188 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907455758964 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714249212549 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.