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The passage and the lecture offer two opposing views regarding fourday workweek policy. while the text states that the fourday workweek would increase the productivity of the employees and would increase the profit of the companies, the professor thinks it would increase the unemployment rate and would reduce the quality of living of the employees.
first, the passage states that the profits of the companies would increase by offering a fourday workweek to the employees. However, the professor thinks that the companies would have to spent more if they offer fourday workweek to their emplyees which will cut down the profit. although the passage states that fourday workweek would enable the company to hire more workers to maintain the same amount of work, according to the professor it would cause additional cost because the companies would need to spent money after training new employees and their medical facilites. besides the companies would need more space to accomodate additional staffs and would require to buy more computers for them which would cut down the benefit earned.
Secondly, the professors refutes the idea of the passage which states that the fourday workweek policy would reduce unemployment rates. he thinks the companies would prefer to force the workers to do the same amount of work within the fourday workweek which they used to do within a fiveday workweek and as a result no new job opportunities for the unemployed ones would be created. besides, he states his concern regarding the promotion of the fourday workweek employees and according to him employees which work fivedays in a week would get prefernece while getting promotion.
Finally, the reading gives an idea that fourday workweek would reduce burden from the employees and would give them an opportunoity to enjoy their lives. Contrary to the passage, the professor thinks fourday workweek would make their career unstable. although the passage states that the quality of living would be improved by the new policy, the professor thinks that it would do the opposite as because the employees would be paid lesser amount of money. Editionally, the professors thinks that fourday workweek employees would be the first one who would loose jobs during a recesion time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...iews regarding fourday workweek policy. while the text states that the fourday workwe...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
... quality of living of the employees. first, the passage states that the profits of...
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Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...mplyees which will cut down the profit. although the passage states that fourday workwee...
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Line 3, column 577, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
... employees and their medical facilites. besides the companies would need more space to ...
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Line 3, column 671, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
...ate additional staffs and would require to buy more computers for them which would cut...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...policy would reduce unemployment rates. he thinks the companies would prefer to fo...
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Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...r the unemployed ones would be created. besides, he states his concern regarding the pr...
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s concern regarding the promotion of the fourday workweek employees and according...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...kweek would make their career unstable. although the passage states that the quality of ...
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Line 7, column 558, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...loyees would be the first one who would loose jobs during a recesion time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 5.04856512141 535% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1373.03311258 139% => OK
No of words: 366.0 270.72406181 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21038251366 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51409475947 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.407103825137 0.540411800872 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 419.366225166 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7353580849 49.2860985944 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.692307692 110.228320801 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1538461538 21.698381199 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455901480267 0.272083759551 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218393813306 0.0996497079465 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083038129099 0.0662205650399 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334496989266 0.162205337803 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482365620531 0.0443174109184 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.3589403974 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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