"A nation should adopt same curriculum before entering student to college"

Essay topics:

"A nation should adopt same curriculum before entering student to college"

it depends on a nation to need all of its students to study same curriculum until college because every nation has cultural difference between all states so every states has its own identity and same curriculum become hurdles for them.if the that nation has same cultural than it's good for the students but multiple cultural nation can't adopt the same curriculum

nation like india has so many cultural in so same curriculum for the nation is not good for their cultural like in india they speak more than 2200 languages and so many different religion and diversity so it make difference.In india they say"every 4Km you will get new language" so same syllabus for a students until college is not beneficial for them.

but if we talk about USA than whole nation share same cultural,language and history so it will be good idea for the students to have identical syllabus for the school until college it will help them in many form like if one student want to change their state for some reason than there is no worry for them because whole states share same subjects for school.

identical curriculum can stop students creativity and can limit their dreams because everyone has same approach to the certain subjects and that is not in favour for the country.In other hand if every students for different states has different curriculum than every students can think outside of the box and will help than to learn new things with the help of the diversity of the subjects.

At the end it depends on the nations cultural,languages and diversity.same curriculum can help them in some points but different syllabus can make them to think differently.

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Average: 5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 282.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00709219858 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73428860738 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 215.323595506 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429078014184 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 23.0359550562 304% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 202.111355445 60.3974514979 335% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 353.0 118.986275619 297% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.5 23.4991977007 300% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202661316404 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122875298668 0.0831039109588 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599667978902 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130693398495 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746728398286 0.0667264976115 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.4 14.1392134831 265% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.43 48.8420337079 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 12.1743820225 251% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 100.480337079 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 11.8971910112 488% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 11.2143820225 268% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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