Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in their private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will lose at least some of their privacy.”
Public figures are known by many people and being revered as a celebrity, idol or source of inspiration by most of the people. Though being watched by public, these people like actors, politicians and athletes also have their personal life which in my opinion nobody should bother because of two reasons.
Nobody is perfect in the world; everybody has their own kind of flaws. If a politician loose upon his private life and any private or personal flaw gets publicized then he may not be voted by public in election. Though he might not be impeccable in his personal life he might be the right person to lead the country and the nation may expense strong political leader for trivial personal flaw.
Everybody should embrace their own personal space in life to be happy. Solitude is the happiness in being alone, or knowing yourself. But enjoying personal space by a public figure is very difficult in our society. For example if an actress embracing her personal space is leaked by any means, most of the people in the society are judgmental and arise questions on her character and her career is also questioned because of making issues on personal life. Though everybody in a society wants to be like the public figures, but actually lots public figures are found to have gone through depression because of having lost personal life. Even renowned singer like Lady Gaga, has admitted to have gone through depression in some part of her life.
However some may argue that public figures should expect to lose at least some privacy but what if those arguing are the public figure and somebody questions him or her about their private life? Public figures are those who are recognized by people for their public life, example athletes for their sports, actors for their acting skills and politician for their leadership but not for their personal life. So I believe that everybody has own personal space in life, even a public figure and none should expect to encroach their privacy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 680, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'admitted having'.
Suggestion: admitted having
...ven renowned singer like Lady Gaga, has admitted to have gone through depression in some part of...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... depression in some part of her life. However some may argue that public figures shou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, so, then, at least, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 340.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86470588235 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34150899205 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482352941176 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8015799645 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.142857143 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276179880711 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115811606759 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856706700009 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191282768477 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990341914042 0.0667264976115 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.