Your brother cannot come on a trip that you planned. Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to join instead. Please say
– Where and when do you plan to go?
– Why can’t your brother come?
– Give a short description of the trip.
Hello Tina,
How are you?, hope you are still up for the holiday trip? Yes, you heard it right, actually my brother had to cancel his booking with us for this trip leaving 1 seat open for grabs and since you were interested, I wanted to ask you first.
First of all, let me tell you about the plan. We are planning for Goa trip by road, on coming Thursday night we will leave for goa and will be back on Tuesday morning.
As Yash got a last moment meeting scheduled with his client and had to travel to Delhi. However he will not be a part of this trip.
I, Sweta, Ria and kush are planning to go to Goa by car for 4 days, spending 2 days in north goa, 2 days in south goa and travelling at night to save time. No worries for the accomodation we will be staying at Rams’ place in goa.
Hope to hear from you soon.
See you soon,
Abhishek
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Tina, How are you?, hope you are still up for ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... his client and had to travel to Delhi. However he will not be a part of this trip. ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, so, still, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.13095238095 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01746203464 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672619047619 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9871552452 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171416733119 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730635270019 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473914538782 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888399361981 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563728660922 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.38 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.22 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.