People have their own ways to achieve their goals. I agree that when people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.
I have two reasons in this essay.
First, despite luck comes to us, without hard work, we cannot achieve our goal. If we do not study hard, we cannot pass on test. For example, when the my final test was coming, I didn’t study. I trusted that luck would help me. Hence, I did not get high score. It is hard to get a high score without hard work.
Second, luck is just an abstract thing. There is no real luck, and lucky. For instance, many people usually talk when they get a bad score on a test that they are not lucky. Apparently, they do not study hard. Our skill is proved by sincerity, not luck.
In conclusion, luck is not a factor that helps our success. Only our sincerity is evidence of it. For the reasons that it is not a real thing and it is ineffective
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
... cannot pass on test. For example, when the my final test was coming, I didn’t study. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, hence, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 52.1666666667 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 1977.66487455 38% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 177.0 407.700716846 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29378531073 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.48103885553 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12719179652 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 212.727598566 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 618.680645161 36% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 20.1344086022 45% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.9760643326 48.9658058833 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 42.2222222222 100.406767564 42% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.83333333333 20.6045352989 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288371548078 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966832623668 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119251515252 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158168508528 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132973582407 0.0645574589148 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.7 11.7677419355 31% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.72 58.1214874552 151% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 10.1575268817 32% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.12 10.9000537634 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 86.8835125448 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 10.002688172 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.0537634409 56% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 10.247311828 39% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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