Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is thought that there are a variety of choices for people in the contemporary society . I completely concur with this, due to the two major factors including entertainment and employment.
To begin with, entertainment plays an essential role in people's daily basis and gradually becomes a commercial field with different types. Thanks to the Internet, people are able to get access to many free websites offering music, videos, TV shows, news in order to take a rest after a hard- working day. Moreover, some traditional games such as kite flying, tug of war,..., one of the most prevalent sources of entertainment in the past, are anticipated to be replaced by modern recreational activities with top- notch facilities. People also spend their spare time on visiting the museums, zoos, stadiums to relax. A recent research has illustrated that in the foreseeable future, entertainment will become a lucrative form of business and the number of sources of entertainment is countless.
In addition, those whose core agreement revolves around the plenty of choices nowadays might contend that the development of technology and globalisation have created new jobs, thereby reducing the rate of unemployment. The percentage of workforce in industrial and services fields experiences significant increase, in lieu of agricultural activities in the past. Employees can be not only trained professionally for their careers but also be received many working policies from authorities and government. Furthermore, with globalisation, people have more opportunities to work abroad. This helps them pursue their favourtite jobs , which are not popular in their own countries. For example, about 20 years ago, people did not have much information about logistics, but today it becomes one of the most commonplace and important careers in any countries.
In conclusion, life nowadays gives people many choices, which are extremely helpful for both physical and mental well-being. The aforementioned reasons lay an adequate foundation for me to believe that people should make use of all of these positive choices to improve and develop.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47878787879 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1169561884 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657575757576 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2560124919 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.533333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199397060228 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616591701638 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374925055782 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119664867913 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130626297173 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.