Most medical doctors want to work in cities where they will make a lot of money. Yet in many rural areas there are not enough doctors. What are the reasons for this problem? How can it be solved?
In the contemporary society, medical doctors have a tendency to work in urban areas, in lieu of rural areas, which leads to many problems. In this essay, the main contributors to this trend, in conjunction with some proposed solutions to tackle this issue will be discussed.
Most medical doctors choose to develop their career in the cities because they believe that it will provide them with a variety of opportunities to be more successful and earn more money for life. In the rural areas, local hospitals do not have enough medical equipment, good facilities,... to help doctors improve their professional skills. The reverse situation is true to urban areas, doctors not only get access to modern medical technology but also have a special training, even studying abroad to broaden their horizons and have professional qualification. Moreover, it is undeniable that salary and rewards paid for medical doctors in the cities are usually higher than those in the countryside. Therefore, their standard of living, as well as the education, entertainment for their children, families are much better when compared with living in the rural areas.
However, the rise of this issue has caused some serious drawbacks that both local authorities and government should not be ignored and co-operate together to address it. Most medical doctors leave for the cities because of chances and money, so local authorities and government should impose policies to rise salary and have more professional trains for alluring highly qualified doctors. By upgrading facilities, local authorities and government can help doctors be more confident to treat victims and still work in the rural ares. Furthermore, the government should have positive effect on the doctors' mind, which help them realize that they their mission is to rescue patients and heal their pains, irrespective of where they live.
In conclusion, because of the salary and opportunities to develop, medical doctors decide to work in the urban areas. The aforementioned reasons lay an adequate foundation for more policies, more encouragement to be introduced by authorities and government to interest qualified doctors for working in rural areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...nough medical equipment, good facilities,... to help doctors improve their profess...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38150289017 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87423350068 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511560693642 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3616136653 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324880284679 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12033188251 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514394489769 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209754826802 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00884253725477 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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