Should bullying be a crime? Why? Explain.

Good job!

But you need to control the time when you are talking. You talked over 60 seconds for this topic.

there are 6 tasks in speaking: 2 independent and 4 integrated tasks .

for 2 independent speakings, you only have 45 seconds to talk.

while for 4 integrated tasks, you have 60 seconds to talk.

When you are practicing, put a clock beside you.

For more info, read this link:
http://testbig.com/question/toefl-speaking

Thank you very much.

I will take care of time.

Regards,
Ana.