the production and consumption of electricity in the top ten countries in the year 2014.
The bar graph illustrates the difference between manufacturing and utilization of electricity measured in billion kWh by ten topmost countries across the globe, in 2004.
Overall, it is observed that countries at the top produce a large amount of electricity to suffice their consumption whereas this amount decreases rapidly as going towards the bottom of the table.
Looking at the details, it is evident that China and the United States have the highest figures for production and consumption which are 5,398 and 4,099 billion kWh for producing electricity, and 5,322 and 3,666 for utilization. Furthermore, another interesting point is that Russia has a marginal difference between production and consumption, with figures 1,057 and 1,036 billion kWh.
On the other hand, countries at the bottom of the list produce considerably less, with the Korean Republic constituting the least of all marking 485.1 billion kWh electricity. However, Germany is the only country that is unable to fulfill the production requirements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
... utilization of electricity measured in billion kWh by ten topmost countries across the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50318471338 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98873430735 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624203821656 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.8435231249 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.8 112.824112599 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292452750977 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145261077543 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581952143032 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156316811519 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480917416519 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.