You received your monthly gas bill and realized that you were overcharged for the last quarter Upon further examination of the information on the gas bill you realized that the gate of your house was not left unlocked for access to be granted for the mete

Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Sally Pearson. I am writing this letter to report a discrepancy in my gas meter reading.
I received the gas bill this morning in the mail. Upon checking the bill, I noticed that the meter reading indicated on the bill for 15 July 2017 was incorrect. I knew this was not right because I when I checked my gas meter located in my front yard, the meter reading was much lower than the figures reflected in the bill you sent me. My meter reflected 1057 mJ whereas your bill showed 1820 mJ.
I also estimated the charges I would have to pay, had the meter reading been correct and this worked out to be almost 300 dollars less than the figure you had indicated.
I do not want to have to pay for an amount of gas that I clearly did not use. Please could you explain how this could be rectified and whether the utilities board could arrange for another meter reading to be carried out to correct this figure.
I thank you and look forward to hearing from you soon

Sincerely,
Sally Pearson

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34375 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18539084827 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588541666667 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4752514176 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252313862684 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103615828666 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549490047012 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128205869796 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726518472453 0.0580467560999 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.