Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
It is the fact that advertisement plays a vital role to promote the sales any new product even for genuine goods also. It is believed by a few people that promotion encourages purchase of 'extra' goods. On the other hand, there is also a sect in the society, of the opinion that new products having capability of improving human life are introduced by means of advertisements. This essay will decipher both the views before reaching to the decent conclusion.
More and more products are hiting the market on regular basis and newer advertising materials are frequently seen at shops and supermarkets. Now a days in this modern era, these advertising hordings are beautifully designed with the aid of computers and printing machines. Additionally the primary promotions usually comprise gigantic discounts. As a result, custumers get attracted and inspired by themselves to have promoted vain produces bought. For instance, newly launched furnitures are advertised with awsome photos and offered a big discount. Customers make their mind to replace the furniture of their home with good conition.
On the other hand, sometimes advertisements also brings a notice of consumers at products of good values capable to improve quality of lives. For goods with new and updated features promotions are necessary to grab the attention of people, For instance, mobile phones and computers, when primarity got into the market, no one was aware about the useful features, which later on proved to be very useful in present.
To conclude, in most cases, advertisements boost sales of many useless products but some good quality products also require to be promoted for betterment of human lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... any new product even for genuine goods also. It is believed by a few people that pr...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...quently seen at shops and supermarkets. Now a days in this modern era, these advertising h...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...tly seen at shops and supermarkets. Now a days in this modern era, these advertising h...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...aid of computers and printing machines. Additionally the primary promotions usually comprise...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, as a result, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23616236162 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86087111616 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634686346863 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4469864771 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168996197716 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572185557024 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379413990044 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105900884567 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119128693448 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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