Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.
Living in a digital era, advertising is not uncommon in convincing buyers to purchase products. Although people would argue that advertisement has made a vastly impact on people, others do not really matter about these daily features. In my opinion, I side with those who believe advertisements are so commonplace these days.
On the one hand, commercials are designated to aim at various audiences. Billboards, posters, and any other visuals appear in several locations in order to make potential consumers come into contact with the products. In this regard, companies would combine an illustration from a prominent actor holding their new branded products. Many people, as a result, would buy these products due to the actor’s popularity. Moreover, kids are also an easy target for commercial ads, which focus catchy songs and vivid images, making them interested in having that particular toy consequently. Hence, companies would successfully gain a boost in their sale rate by targeting the correct costumers for their products through advertising.
On the other hand, advertisements nowadays are so ubiquitous that lead to disinterest in people. To put it differently, people would easily encounter any pop-up ads on whatever websites they are using at that moment and with several times like that, they would feel irritated and annoyed. Hence, people would develop a behavior of avoiding the ads right at the moment they see it or even raising hatred for certain actors who appear in the ads. To illustrate this point, my friend who are usually not patient enough to wait for the ads on YouTube to be finished, but she also eventually hates the actress who plays a role in that clip because she has appeared so many times.
To sum up, I agree that companies have come up with many effective marketing strategies using advertising; however, they all become so repetitive that people start to dislike and ignore them. Therefore, I believe that advertising is on the brink of discomfort for certain people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('vastly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('impact') instead of another adjective.
...would argue that advertisement has made a vastly impact on people, others do not really matter ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16158536585 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81471630898 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618902439024 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.636242907 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.866666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154114426398 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573669153957 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467948625572 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105250690351 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595690214015 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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