Mobile phones are considered essential by most people nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones and state your opinion.
In the digital age, the popularity of using mobile phones has increased gradually all over the world. Although some people argue that these gadgets have negative impacts, others believe that phones come to them as a benefit. The following essay will examine both these perspectives and I will further explain why I strongly believe that mobile phones are a crucial invention.
To begin with, one drawback that can be raised to counter the positive impacts of portable phones is that they can potentially harm humans' health. In other words, scientists have been suggesting that mobile phones contribute to some cognitive diseases due to the signal radiation that these devices give off, especially when we sleep. In a long term, those signals would adversely cause disfunction or unbalance to humans’ biological clock. As a result, mobile phones would slowly wear humans’ health down without their awareness.
On the contrary, when it comes to emergency, these gadgets have shown that they play a vital role as the most useful tool. To put it further, when a person faces a difficulty and he urgently seeks some helps from others, phones are the easiest mean of communication that he could reach at that moment. To illustrate this point, my friend experienced a situation when his scooter’s tire was suddenly deflated, but a call to me saved his day. Mobile phones, from my stand point, are the best option to have in any unexpected circumstances.
In conclusion, despite the harmful aspect that these devices could bring to our well-being by its signal radiation, I totally think that the positive side of this invention can outweigh the disadvantage in term of emergency.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10144927536 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.690934004 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1776580322 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20154277204 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741220909357 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546859842935 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111885860357 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069578967433 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.