Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is believed that the maternal instincts of women are higher than men hence they are better at taking care of the children. This belief also leads to another thinking of suggesting females staying at home to bring up their children instead of going out for work. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this practice because both parents are all responsible for childcare.
Firstly, women deserve the right to work. Throughout the history of humanity, there have been several times when women stood up to defend and speak up themselves to gain equality as men. Even though the productivity of female workers is believed lower than that of their male counterparts, more women have been proving themselves with marked differences in many other fields of occupations. Taken Emma Watson as an example, who is willing to spend the vast majority of her time to stand up for women's rights and eventually becomes the UN Women Goodwill Ambassador.
Moreover, men nowadays choose to work from home. It is not uncommon to see male parents staying at home to be in charge of household chores such as cooking, doing laundry, or childcare. In this regard, many conducted surveys have also pointed out that all these paternal interviewees admitted to having longer hours to work as well as take care of their children. Furthermore, saving money was another reason for both males and females. With both parents going to work, children would have a stable financial reliance since the money for education nowadays is more expensive than before.
To sum up, I believe that both males and females share the same parental responsibility. Women nowadays can prove themselves to be even better at work than men, so there would be irrational to stop them from working. In addition to that, more male parents choose to telecommute to share the chores with their mothers, and this has proved to be an effective practice.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9375 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59198735288 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0177249043 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253204723514 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089111194673 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563944266416 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16706840252 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049382090072 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.