In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby.
To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
With a higher number of shopping centers nowadays, shopping becomes a daily hobby to the majority of people as compared to the past, when it seemed to be a household chore. While I believe that this trend contributes a considerable amount of money to the economy, there are also some potentially negative impacts on society in the long term.
On the one hand, shopping reflects the economic aspect of a country. In this regard, when a country is considered prosperous and developed, its citizens demand a large number of products that they desire to purchase. Taken China as an example, Chinese people love going shopping to buy the most updated technological devices because their income allows them to do so. Moreover, taxes should also be taken into account since the more they purchase, the more taxes people have to pay, hence helping governments allocate more money into other aspects of that country like scientific research.
On the other hand, higher demand for shopping leads to the growth of unreliable products. From this perspective, counterfeiting some popular products is not uncommon in our society, such as clothing, technological gadgets, and medical products. There have been several scandals about people who bought a particular medicine to cure their illness, this turned out that they could not be better but getting worse instead. In this case, advertising has played a vital role in contributing to this matter since governments have not yet established any restrictions on commercial ads.
To recapitulate, it is undeniable that the greater number of consumption people make, the higher a country's economic status is. However, some drawbacks lie within this positive trend, and untrustworthy products are just one of them. I believe in the future that governments should be stricter on the process of producing as well as the advertisement to prevent unwanted circumstances.
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2393442623 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90521406181 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593442622951 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5176513751 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.923076923 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168857707658 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561984591937 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368005977693 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102352572667 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292782721389 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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