The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day

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The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day

The improvement of the art museum between 2015 and now is depicted in the maps. Overall, the gallery has witnessed vast changes with new equipped modern facilities. Moreover, some rooms have been refunctioned as well.
When looking at developments of exhibitions in the art gallery, it is clear that the fourth Exhibition Room has been divided for the installation of Children's Area and Temporary Exhibition. Moreover, the cafe has been reduced in size and converted into a Gallery Shop, meanwhile, the Gallery Office has been deconstructed to make way for the Vending Machine. In contrast, the row of Exhibition Rooms on the left hand side of the Entrance has not been refurbished at all.
Moving on to describe the remaining parts of the art museum, alongside the conversion of the Cafe, the stairs have been relocated to make way for the construction of the elevator to the eastern side of it. In addition, the receptionist area has been moved to the east of the Temporary Exhibition to make rooms for the open area in the center of the gallery.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88268156425 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85685236633 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541899441341 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6223277231 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.25 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.090251166939 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455651292127 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452373244861 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731998337668 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049421229206 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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