People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is hard to define behavior in a particular sentence. There are various definitions defining behavior, but in general, behavior is the way in which people react towards the situation built up around their surroundings. People develop their behavior depending on the way they have been brought up in society, their environment and families. It is true that the behavior of people is determined by external elements but, we human are the intelligent species in animal kingdom which have the liberty to behave in a particular manner towards the situation around us. It is unjustified to blame external factors totally for the people’s behavior however there are internal factors which react in a particular situation rather than external factor.
Firstly, we, human beings grow in a particular environment or societies since our childhood days. Our way of approaching towards the situation depends upon the conditions around us i.e. our way of talking, listening as well as thinking depend upon the people influences around us but the decision to react upon the particular situation is our own instinct or the way of liberty of thought. For instance, it is a general truth that people do things which influences them. Likewise, a football player generally copies the plans of their icon player how they do exercise, practice in the field and their dietary plans. But, the performance in the game the player generally develops his own tactic to be successful in the game. Similarly, students are particularly influence by the erudite people around them, but when they prefer to choose the subject they decide according to their own will and their self-interest.
Secondly, it is true that positive energy enthusiasts people to do positive work in the surrounding. However, there are criminal minded person in the society who generally do crimes according to their self- interest and their behavior are not affected by the rules and regulations of the societies as well as harsh punishment decided by the society upon these illegal acts. For example- If a person is motivated to do heinous crime and generally do crime although there is a provision of hang in the constitution if somebody found doing illegal acts in the society. Such harsh punishment even does not prohibit them doing macabre crime.
However, sometimes it is true that people behave according to the external wills and the rules and regulations of the society. For instance, some countries have strict fines for the reckless throwing of garbage in the street. The people of that country follow such rules strictly and deposit garbage in garbage bags or dustbin. But, when they visit other country in which there is no strict rules regarding throwing of garbage irresponsibly. They generally react in the same way as that of people of that country and throw garbage without any hesitation. Similarly, people living in certain part of the country wear dress according to their own customs and tradition. When they shift to other cities areas, they are influence by the environment of the cities areas and wear clothes according to the fashion in the cities.
In conclusion, it is true that people behavior come upon the environment in which they live but when to decide upon the particular situation the liberty of thought comes to play and finally his/ her instinct plays a major role to react upon the situation rather than external factors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 541, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding situation'?
Suggestion: the surrounding situation
...o behave in a particular manner towards the situation around us. It is unjustified to blame external fa...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding conditions'?
Suggestion: the surrounding conditions
...hing towards the situation depends upon the conditions around us i.e. our way of talking, listening as w...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'people', 'persons'?
Suggestion: people; persons
...ing. However, there are criminal minded person in the society who generally do crimes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as well as, it is true, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2863.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 562.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09430604982 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86893614481 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70332018002 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.421708185053 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 890.1 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0793187806 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.47826087 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4347826087 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78260869565 5.21951772744 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148254232419 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524323167165 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379436000583 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866604453654 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435471633521 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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