You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
It is undeniable that hosting international sports events can produce a handful of issues for the hosting nation. There are many people who believe that these types of occasions are nothing but a wastage of valuable time and money. However, I consider the international sports events as an excellent opportunity for the hosting country to earn recognition and economic benefits.
Hosting international sports events open doors for tourism. There are many people around the globe who are sports fanatic and are more likely to travel to another country which is hosting their favourite sports to watch the games live rather than on TV. If they have free time, they may visit the tourist spots and thus enable the state to earn huge sum of money. Secondly, the cost of plane fare and hotel stay will only add more monetory value to the hosting country's economic development. Thirdly, the sales of different products from shops near the stadium or hotel or even in the shopping malls will increase significantly as the sports lovers will buy gifts and souvenior for their families. As a result, the hosting nation will gain the economice stability it was in need of. For instances, the shop owners near the stadium in Dhaka reported to have sold jerseys and related materials up to five fold during the T20 World cup in 2011 which was held in Bangladesh. Besides, the shopkeepers tend to hike prices of goods if they have high demand which allow them to earn more.
On the other hand, hosting international sports events can cause situations like traffic congestion and security issues. Not only the office workers might take leave to watch the games on site but also they become unproductive during the office hours by spending time on TV or mobile to get sports update.
In conclusion, every action has both good and bad impact on community. Likewise, major events like hosting the international sports matches will lead to positive and negative outcome on our society. As it is clear that hosting such festivals are very beneficial to the hosting state, the government sshould make arrangement like this more frequently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98033707865 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55830107066 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581460674157 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.310930547 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8125 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195101724244 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714124259047 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502364170849 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129847795983 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042890308828 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.