You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment In your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your wo

Essay topics:

You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
describe the problem with the equipment.
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about a Wireless Router that I bought from your store a few months ago. Unfortunately, it has suddenly stopped working and I am unable to connect to the Internet and work from home. I am hoping you would replace it immediately.

The Netgear - AC1750 Dual-Band Wi-Fi Router that I purchased from you was operational until the end of last week but it is not working at the moment. I cannot find out the exact reason for it not to function but I have tried to do some initial diagnostics without any luck. I tried a similar router that I borrowed from a friend and it worked as expected.
I work from home as a freelancer and my work depends on an uninterrupted Internet connection. I have several ongoing projects and I must meet the deadlines to retain my client base. As you can see, I am totally dependent on this equipment to get connected to the Internet, so I need to get this router fixed immediately. I suggest that you either replace the device with a new one or repair it within the next two days.

Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon.

Yours faithfully,
Ritika

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
... in morning, but my workstation did not started and was giving error related to bootabl...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: IT_IS[7]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ere are strict deadlines for some work, its impacting my work and in case deadlines...
^^^
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...n case deadlines are not met, this will effect client as well. As this issue is ha...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r response anxiously. Yours Sincerely Niharika
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51546391753 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56965871744 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634020618557 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4816150575 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1225745269 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642260129307 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504571847917 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803874008855 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023004528519 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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