Fewer and fewer children are willing to look after their parents as they get older these days.
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
By the passage of time, children are getting busy with their new responsibilities, so many of them tend not to take care of their parents. In this essay, I will explain the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Firstly, children can guarantee better facilities for their old parents in nursing houses rather than their home. As children get older, they get stuck in ups and downs of the new life with too many duties in their work or family. So, with less free time, they can not provide those needs that their parents want. So, parents can take advantage of nursing houses to develop their social skills, find new friends, and escape from loneliness. Moreover, old parents may have the other chance to rely on themselves and hold their own. Some people believe that parents must be able to take care of themselves unless they are sick or have physical problems. In this case, they may not complaint about their loneliness and try to find ways to overcome their challenges, such as finding a friend or learning how to work with some less complicated cell phone.
On the other hand, leaving parents on their own may bring some conflicts, and parents' hearts might be broken. Some parents want their children to take care of them when they become old, but children who are now adults are so busy and cannot fulfill their expectation. In this case, parents get frustrated and sad for their children inconsiderate manner. In the long term, they may suffer from depression, which can have bad effects on their relationship with their children and the people around them. In addition, if children visit their parents less, grandchildren will be deprived of seeing their grandparents, which can negatively impact children's thoughts. If there is no efficient connection between parents and children, grandchildren may not find family values and morals at their age. And grandparents don't have the chance to teach them some customs and beliefs of the family. So, grandchildren may usually miss grandparents and have less attention to respect beliefs in the future.
In conclusion, I think children should strive to be careful about their parents' condition even if they are so busy, but parents should be independent and rely on their own abilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...ir relationship with their children and the people around them. In addition, if children visit their p...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ir children and the people around them. In addition, if children visit their paren...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d morals at their age. And grandparents dont have the chance to teach them some cust...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97612732095 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63421802747 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501326259947 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7674052056 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.222222222 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282697953742 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113646193823 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668287675535 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205438287408 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445300886759 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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