No one can deny the fact that people do hard work in order to fulfill their dreams, and one of them is traveling all over the world. On that ground, seeing different landscapes, experiencing various cultures, are worth exploring during traveling. In this regard, some people contend that younge age is the best time when people can enjoy traveling to different places. On the other side, there is a group of people who believe take it as an exaggeration and posit that traveling does not have age any limit, and so, people can enjoy traveling at any age which might be elderly too. Certianly, from my vantage point, the former veiw contains more weight. For the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons and examples justifying my stance.
The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is that irrefutabely, young individuals are very energetic and enthusiastic that is suitable while traveling to distinct places because they do not only travel to long journey but also might have to face rapid climate changes. In such a scenario, elderly might not able to adapt drastic climate conditions since their bodies do not support them and they might face some serious health issues. besides, considering the medical insurance, apparently many insurance companies do not grant insurance if elders get sick while traveling. In contrast, youngsters are unlikely face medical probelms on trips. To shed more light on this, talking about my last trip to Australia which can be compelling example of what has been mentioned above. I went to Astralia with my parents for a week. After a flight journey of more than eight hours, I bounced back easily without taking rest, while my parents got sick and thereby, they took rest for two days. As a result of that they was not able to explore some places in Australia. Ultimately, it is judicious to say that people should travel abroad in young age.
Another noteworthy reason is that traveling abroad is very costly and it is especially difficult when people do not have any flowing incomes. To be more specific, if elders spend all of their saving in traveling, they would face financial crisis later on in their lives. However, spending a lot of money for adults is not difficult as they can recover it from their jobs. To exemplify, last year, my uncle has decided to travel different places in cruize. Therefore, he spend all of his life saving during this one trip. Even though he had made life-long amazing memories in that trip, it was not a wise decision that he made. This is because he got a heart attack last month, and subsequently, had to undergone by extensive emergency heart surgery which costed him a lot of budget.Since he spend all of his saving in that trip, he did not have enough bank balance to pay of his own medical bills. Forntunately, his son paid all of his treatment charge. Admittedly, had he not spend his saving for trip, he would not had asked his son for the financial help.
To recapitulate, from contemplating all remarks, in spite of the fact that some may not agree with my viewpoint, I utterly posit that people should not wait to get old to explore new places instead they should do it at a young age. This is because they are capable to face health challenges on trips and because they are financially independent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, in contrast, talking about, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2753.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 574.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79616724739 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89472135074 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5882011792 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 859.5 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 4.94265232975 303% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8428538738 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.884615385 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26923076923 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0820819879193 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250578144002 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363495687551 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.051490544339 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196039437442 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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