Do you agree or disagree:
It is better to travel abroad to visit different countries when you are younger rather than when you are older.
Traveling abroad, or even all around the world is sometime an ultimate dream of people. Seeing different landscapes, experiencing diverse cultures, are definitely worthy of pursuing. But will you plan to fulfill your dream when you are young and energetic, or you will wait to grow older and save more money for a luxury vacation? From my perspective, I vote for the first one. I strongly recommend to experience the world when we are still young.
To start with, when you are young, your body or your health condition is more suitable for an abroad journey, which usually involves long distance of transportation, and rapidly changed climate. Obviously, young body tend to adapt to the rapid changes in life more efficiently. Take the trip of my whole family to Australia for example, I bounced back quickly after the flight of more than ten hours, while my parents felt down into the bed and took a long rest for almost one day.
Another advantage to travel abroad as a young people is, you can save lots of money. There are many discounts designed especially for younger fellows, such as the special package of train tickets that designed just for students (aged under 26 years old). These tickets are maybe half of the price than usual ones. In addition, you can always crush into the youth hostels during your travel, which are cheaper and more importantly, you can meet friends all around world!
Although someone will argue that the travel budgets will be more ample when you are older, and can contribute more money for your travel plans. I still believe fancy hotels and any other luxury auxiliaries are not necessary for the travel itself. Maybe you can experience more when you choose to blend into with the local people, instead of living in a five-star hotel chain which keeps the similar design that you can see elsewhere.
So, travel should be more spontaneous. Do not wait till you are old to find time and money for traveling abroad. To see the world and get exiting experience while you are young, which I believe will broaden your vision and mind, and boost your future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, still, while, for example, in addition, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80110497238 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37075164364 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569060773481 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2118113751 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.235294118 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306310687127 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982670516127 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913794758584 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19405019618 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061939119099 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.