Not all drivers obey the laws while driving on roads.
What are the reasons for this? What can be done to fix this problem?
It is said that some drivers do not respect the laws while driving on roads. In this essay, I will explain the possible reasons and suggest some solutions for this problem.
Firstly, some drivers are in hurry most of the time. They do not want to be late on their workplace or a meeting, so they drive fast. In this case, they may disturb the safety of the roads and create a danger for other drivers. Moreover, some drivers, especially Young Ones, drive fast just for fun. They see the Urban streets as the place for moving in between other cars and Lines or pass Crossroads when the traffic light is red, also some other things that they can chase a car and start a racing competition on highways in and outside of the city. Unfortunately, these kinds of drivers are often drunk, which is a real threat for others, and make too much noise pollution while driving and distract other drivers attention.
To limit these attempts, the government should impose stricter laws and penalize the rulebreaker. Some drivers must be banned from driving for a while and be paid a huge amount of fines. In this case, these drivers would be afraid of committing crimes in the future. On top of that, the police can track any dangerous moves on roads by adding more speed control cameras and inspecting citizens' commune every hour of the day. They can use these cameras in some places where accidents or crime rates are higher. Subsequently, People will h drive slower and obey the laws.
In conclusion, not all citizens tend to obey driving laws even if they have a driving licence because sometimes they are in a hurry or they love moments while driving, like action movies. On the other hand, the Solutions are implementing strong barriers to discourage individuals committing the crime and use cameras to control movements on the roads.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 711, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'drivers'' or 'driver's'?
Suggestion: drivers'; driver's
...lution while driving and distract other drivers attention. To limit these attempts, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, while, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40909734133 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5080269318 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301581147717 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100095103854 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687211530437 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201226271456 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753582054753 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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