Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is hard to deny that in today's fast-pace society, just enjoying current situation can relese our pressure. This kind of opinion may let people to generate the idea that being able to make future regulations for ourselves is not essential since we need to focus on what is happening today. However, from my point of view, such kind of statement contains both logical and factual fallcies. With future development and future success considered, I strongly agree that the ability to making future plans is imprtant for all of us.
First of all, having a claer plan for future contributes greatly to our future development. In our path towards future, where should we heading is supposed to be regulated in advance. With a relatively precise plan for ourselves, we can be more confident when confronting upcoming events. For an ordinary student, he will study from primary school to high school, then apply to a university for future study. It seems to be unnecessary for him to decide for himselves before graduated from senior high, since everything is regulated by others: the school requires you to study from Monday to Friday, your teachers ask you to review courses in time. However, in university, it seems like no one will make plans for you. It is you who choose the major, decide when go to the classroom. After graduation, there are more choices waiting for you to make. Without a clear plan for yourself, you are likely to make unrational decisons for the coming decisions.
In addition, making regulation and organizing onself can large ones's possibility to achiving his goal. With advanced plans, we can be aware of what we are spposed to do currently to make us better prepared for the future. Take the case of my neighbor Alex, who is about 5 years older than me. From a young age, Alex was able to regulate himself. During vacations, when all of the children in my district were playing together, Alex began carefully follow the schedule made for himself. In fact, he would also play with us. But when time for homework came, he would left toys behind and began to handling his homework. I remeber he would always be the first one to finish homework. At spare time, he would expand his horizon and focus on what attacted hime. Last year, I heard that Alex had already became an professional computer engineer, who worked in the domestic giant technology company. In fact, such a case is not unique- it is universial. With plans ahead of time, all of us can have the chance to heading towards success.
Indeed, only focusing on current situations can releve us from making plans, which is a time consuming task for the majority of us. However, even take the time cost into account, it is still worthwhile to make thorough regulations for us.
In conclusion, with the analysis above, I do agree that for us young people, possessing the ability to plan and organize ourselves is truely important.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...egulate himself. During vacations, when all of the children in my district were playing to...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 566, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...t when time for homework came, he would left toys behind and began to handling his h...
^^^^
Line 5, column 799, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...ast year, I heard that Alex had already became an professional computer engineer, who ...
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Line 5, column 806, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...r, I heard that Alex had already became an professional computer engineer, who wor...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, so, still, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2419.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80914512922 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.557902669 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546719681909 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 777.6 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 4.94265232975 364% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1725682192 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3928571429 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9642857143 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186211916039 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518649635168 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507432332406 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121232878465 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689740627581 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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