If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Everybody should have a goal. As the old saying says,” The soldier who does not want to be a general is not a good soldier.” And it is true that we need to pay off if we want to realize our goal. But this is not mean that anything we do to attain the goal is justifiable. So I disagree with the prompt that if a goal is worthy, any means to attain it are justifiable. There are two reasons to explain my statement.
To begin with, if we want to realize a goal, we should try our best to attain it. But we should not do something that diminishes others to benefit us. It will not be tolerated if we do something harmful to others just to access our’ goals. Sometimes when you do not mind whatever it takes to attain it will reversely prevent you to attain the goal. For instance, through the times of the second war, Hitler killed many innocent people just to realize his dream. The behaviors that he did make thousands of people lose their life. In the end, he failed. What can we know from this example is that this world consists of people, so when you are trying to attain a goal, you have to consider others if what you want to do will influence other people.
Moreover, how should we define whether a goal is worthy? Something we thought to be worthy may be useless or even harmful to other people. Consequently, things we did to attain our worthy goal will cause trouble to others. For instance, a patient who suffers from heart disease needs another healthy heart to change. If we take any means as the prompt says, should we kill people with a healthy heart? The above example illustrates that we can not take any means to attain a goal just because we think it is worthy by ourselves.
However, if we make sure that what we want to achieve will not hurt the interests of others, we should try our best to attain it. For instance, almost all of us want to study at the best university, so in order to realize our dream, we could do is work so hard and practice more and more.
To sum up, we should take any means to attain our goal with the precondition that our goal will not hurt others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, for instance, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 33.0505617978 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.285 5.05705443957 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30813777752 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7293522952 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9090909091 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95454545455 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178117877524 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695197605391 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06738457225 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119797298972 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511157834793 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 14.1392134831 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 48.8420337079 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 12.1639044944 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.38706741573 79% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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