tpo 28.1
The text and lecturer offer two opposing views on the accuracy of the hypothesis which illustrates the reasons that Robert E. Pery did really reach the North Pole. While the text lists some factors as the main logics of the event, the professor counters these specific points and presents some clues to call into question for the information in the reading passage.
First of all, the professor refutes the committee’s approval of National Geographic Society which in the reading part is candidate as one of the clues of this investigation. The lecturer states that the committee was the financial advocator of this research. Thus, this was with bias. Besides, the committee spent only two days to review the information and did not it carefully.
Next, although the passage compares the British explorer named Tom Avery which depicts the same function with Pery about the speed of the investigation, the professor doubts the truth of this analogy. As the lecturer states the Avery did this research with the less weight and in a favorable weather condition. These factors paved the path for the Avery to do the research in 37 days, while the Pery's investigation required more duration to overcome the fetters of heavy foods carriage and harsh weather condition.
Finally, the lecturer argues the accuracy of the photographs taken by Pery. Meanwhile the passage presumes the shadows in Perry's photographs as a clue to confirm his presence in the North Pole. Based upon the professor's evidences these photo are fuzzy and unfocused and it is impossible to correctly calculate the angle of sunlight. That how the lecturer casts doubt about the accuracy of the reason.
which in the reading part is candidate
which in the reading part is the candidate
and did not it carefully.
and did not do it carefully.
named Tom Avery which depicts the same function
named Tom Avery who depicts the same function
the professor doubts the truth of this analogy
the professor cast doubt on the truth of this analogy
As the lecturer states the Avery did this research with the less weight and in a favorable weather condition.
the lecturer states that the Avery did this research with the less weight and in a favorable weather condition.
Sentence: These factors paved the path for the Avery to do the research in 37 days, while the Pery's investigation required more duration to overcome the fetters of heavy foods carriage and harsh weather condition.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to foods and carriage
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 275 250
No. of Characters: 1369 1200
No. of Different Words: 150 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.072 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.978 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.582 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.154 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.071 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.348 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.58 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.054 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4