It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the recent times enormous growth in technology and media is evident. It is feared that local customs and cultural values would suffer as a result of technological developments. I believe traditions and cultures are not at stake as technology expands, rather both can establish and cherish together.
It is argued that, social media has brought the world closer but it has also destroyed conventional methods of socialization. For instance, facebook, one of the major social networking portal has made it possible to stay in contact with friends abroad. However, people are less aware of their im...
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youth are well informed
youths are well informed
the lack serious information
they lack serious information
certain countries has used technological development
certain countries have used technological development
flaws:
Sentence Length SD: 4.667 7.5 //"Sentence Length SD is low" means that the essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentences varieties wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 285 350
No. of Characters: 1547 1500
No. of Different Words: 177 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.109 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.428 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.914 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 124 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.812 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.667 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.297 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.509 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.035 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 511, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ndia has risen by 25% in last 10 years. As a result even western population visit ...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...all, technology might have overshadowed some of the old traditional customs in some parts o...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261682242991 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.155763239875 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.121495327103 0.0946595960268 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0498442367601 0.0501214627716 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0498442367601 0.0437548338989 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105919003115 0.122226691241 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0591900311526 0.0403226058552 147% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.04601824466 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0280373831776 0.0326793684256 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0591900311526 0.0861772015684 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.01246105919 0.021408717616 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00311526479751 0.011925033212 26% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1882.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.60350877193 6.12580529183 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.442105263158 0.374742101984 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.357894736842 0.28420135186 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.263157894737 0.203846283523 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.185964912281 0.137316102897 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04601824466 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.56093040696 113% => OK
Word variations: 72.3180189072 60.7387585426 119% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8125 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5211204778 49.517814964 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.625 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.814263465372 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 53.6019736842 49.1944974215 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.67073170732 1.69124875643 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165447616405 0.332605444948 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0926470130898 0.102741220458 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0544535713803 0.0668466124924 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.486036480454 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0906160882302 0.148594505496 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621335411522 0.134430193775 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515755533482 0.0742795772207 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.225509432352 0.324371583561 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0339576195638 0.0638462369009 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11905038468 0.228012699653 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444177261234 0.058150111329 76% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
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Rates: 77.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9