Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position."
The given statement points that anything is fair in business to earn maximum profit. I strongly disagree with the line. The business selfishness can become dangerous for the humanity and mankind. Emotions and sentiments of people should always taken into account along with business.
The primary reason for my disagreement is the fact that business selfishness affects the quality of life style and personal thinking tendency. For an example, If any pharmaceutical firm decides to boost it's revenue by lowering the quality of certain medicines, a vast population will be affected. The quality of their lives might become more poorer. Apart from that, side effects can also harm an individual. The additional cost may become reason for collapse of whole family. This kind of incidents makes place for personal inclination, everyone will be seeking an opportunity to become selfish and gain as much as they can. As for an another illustration, any engineering firm, public utilities sectors, law and order and you name it, can be considered. All of a sudden, there will be huge fall in humanity and trust among the people. This may lead to riots, fights and even wars. This kind of situation is never economical for any individual, firm, company and country at the end.
Secondly, it can affect the quality of education and services. No one would be willing to study hard to get top position in any well known company or at government after knowing the ill will of the operating firm despite some will choose to give bribe or choose any other way to get the position. The individual will soon become demolisher of his/her own company/firm due to lack of knowledge and skills. Ultimately, any way can lead the company into self-destruction position. Apart from the self destruction, they will contribute to demolish the society.
Conclusively, It is never recommended to ignore quality of human life to earn more money. The more money can also be earned by giving satisfactory services and high quality, which result in rise of the satisfaction level among customers. This can boost number of customers, who contribute to the profit of the company over a long period. So, according to me the way of earning trust of people by giving desired quality of products is the best way to gain profit, the all other self oriented ways should be avoided.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'poorer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: poorer
...The quality of their lives might become more poorer. Apart from that, side effects can also...
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Line 2, column 635, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an illustration' or 'another illustration'.
Suggestion: an illustration; another illustration
...sh and gain as much as they can. As for an another illustration, any engineering firm, public utilities...
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Line 2, column 953, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ver economical for any individual, firm, company and country at the end. Second...
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Line 4, column 29, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended ignoring'.
Suggestion: recommended ignoring
...e society. Conclusively, It is never recommended to ignore quality of human life to earn more mone...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'apart from', 'as for', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259174311927 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.139908256881 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0802752293578 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0412844036697 0.046263068375 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0252293577982 0.0685040099705 37% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119266055046 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0366972477064 0.0351676179071 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75698307127 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0344036697248 0.0309702414327 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.114678899083 0.0887237588012 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0481651376147 0.0209618222197 230% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0045871559633 0.0139019557991 33% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2350.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 393.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9796437659 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.346055979644 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277353689567 0.251872472559 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185750636132 0.174417080927 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119592875318 0.112833075102 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75698307127 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562340966921 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 64.9346734459 59.2087087015 110% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0869565217 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8831149245 48.84282405 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.173913043 120.699889404 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0869565217 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.478260869565 0.644075263715 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 44.8223254785 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.01111111111 1.45489161554 138% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239687822457 0.300154397459 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0896188801324 0.103427244359 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0621767893702 0.0752933317313 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474522936524 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135204774297 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929731016151 0.114077575197 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427220830849 0.0781384742642 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.401899644091 0.336927656856 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0464620448242 0.067059652881 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185470049278 0.210909579961 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382731728337 0.0618886996521 62% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.86379928315 259% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.