Planning and organization complement each other .They are the keys to success. Views differ considerably when it comes to the issue that it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Some people contend that planning and organization are not popular because of the restrictions of doing specific things when you want to do something else. However, as far as I am concerned, I completely agree that organizing and planning are very essential for every one who needs to be successful in our contemporary complex life.
First of all, planning and organization are the only two factors that lead to a successful life. In order to achieve your goals or dreams, you have to make a list of prioritizing, put the essential things on the top of the list , by this way we can fulfill our dreams within a short period of time. People who lack this skill are suffering a lot throughout their life, they fell always overwhelmed and exhausted due to over working without any good result. However. people who own this skill have a better and enjoyable life. According to recent studied conducted by Cairo university, 85% of people who are always making plans and implemented them by their good organization have a better and joyful life than those who do not have these skills.For example, Naguib Swaris is a famous and a successful businessman in Egypt and own the biggest phone network company. This person has nothing before, but after making plans for his life and organizing them in an efficient way, he be able to achieve this big wealth and become one of the most successful peolpe not only in my country, but also in the whole world.This example demonstrates the importance of planning and organization in our life.
Moreover, by planning and organization our plans ,our life can be easier and relaxable. When we have everything organized and planned, we can fell comfortable and enjoyable especially if someone have a list of what to do , that would save us alot of time to enjoy other things in our life. For example, when I was in college , I used to make a schedule of my daily duties , such as going to college in the morning, doing my assignments afterwards, tide my room, and washing my cloth. THis scheudule enable me to have plenty of free time at evening to unwind and relax by watching TV or hanging out with my friends, this made my academic life much easier. As opposed to many of my friends who do not like to do plans a head of time, they always complain of lacking time to balance between their social life and academic life. As you can see, having plans in our modern complex life nade it easier.
To put it in a nutshell, plans and orgnization are very cruicial in our complex life because not only enable us to fullfill our dreams , but also made our life much more easier. We should all have plans with good organization.
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he be able to achieve
he is able to achieve
because not only enable us to fullfill our dreams , but also made our life much more easier.
because they not only enable us to fullfill our dreams , but also made our life much more easier.
Sentence: This person has nothing before, but after making plans for his life and organizing them in an efficient way, he be able to achieve this big wealth and become one of the most successful peolpe not only in my country, but also in the whole world.This example demonstrates the importance of planning and organization in our life.
Error: peolpe Suggestion: people
Sentence: Moreover, by planning and organization our plans ,our life can be easier and relaxable.
Error: relaxable Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: When we have everything organized and planned, we can fell comfortable and enjoyable especially if someone have a list of what to do , that would save us alot of time to enjoy other things in our life.
Error: alot Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: THis scheudule enable me to have plenty of free time at evening to unwind and relax by watching TV or hanging out with my friends, this made my academic life much easier.
Error: scheudule Suggestion: schedule
Sentence: As you can see, having plans in our modern complex life nade it easier.
Error: nade Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: To put it in a nutshell, plans and orgnization are very cruicial in our complex life because not only enable us to fullfill our dreams , but also made our life much more easier.
Error: cruicial Suggestion: crucial
Error: orgnization Suggestion: organization
Error: fullfill Suggestion: fulfill
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 508 350
No. of Characters: 2300 1500
No. of Different Words: 242 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.748 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.528 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.551 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 150 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 104 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.05 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.36 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.521 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.214 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
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he be able to achieve
he is able to achieve
because not only enable us to fullfill our dreams , but also made our life much more easier.
because they not only enable us to fullfill our dreams , but also made our life much more easier.
Sentence: This person has nothing before, but after making plans for his life and organizing them in an efficient way, he be able to achieve this big wealth and become one of the most successful peolpe not only in my country, but also in the whole world.This example demonstrates the importance of planning and organization in our life.
Error: peolpe Suggestion: people
Sentence: Moreover, by planning and organization our plans ,our life can be easier and relaxable.
Error: relaxable Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: When we have everything organized and planned, we can fell comfortable and enjoyable especially if someone have a list of what to do , that would save us alot of time to enjoy other things in our life.
Error: alot Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: THis scheudule enable me to have plenty of free time at evening to unwind and relax by watching TV or hanging out with my friends, this made my academic life much easier.
Error: scheudule Suggestion: schedule
Sentence: As you can see, having plans in our modern complex life nade it easier.
Error: nade Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: To put it in a nutshell, plans and orgnization are very cruicial in our complex life because not only enable us to fullfill our dreams , but also made our life much more easier.
Error: cruicial Suggestion: crucial
Error: orgnization Suggestion: organization
Error: fullfill Suggestion: fulfill
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 out of 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 508 350
No. of Characters: 2300 1500
No. of Different Words: 242 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.748 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.528 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.551 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 150 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 104 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.05 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.36 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.521 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.214 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...g and organization complement each other .They are the keys to success. Views diff...
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Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...and organization complement each other .They are the keys to success. Views differ c...
^^^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... essential things on the top of the list , by this way we can fulfill our dreams w...
^^
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e can fulfill our dreams within a short period of time. People who lack this skill are sufferi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...o over working without any good result. However. people who own this skill have a bette...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...rking without any good result. However. people who own this skill have a better and en...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 746, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...than those who do not have these skills.For example, Naguib Swaris is a famous and ...
^^^
Line 3, column 954, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... plans for his life and organizing them in an efficient way, he be able to achieve this big wealth ...
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Line 3, column 978, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...organizing them in an efficient way, he be able to achieve this big wealth and bec...
^^
Line 3, column 1110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...my country, but also in the whole world.This example demonstrates the importance of ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., by planning and organization our plans ,our life can be easier and relaxable. Wh...
^^
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ble and enjoyable especially if someone have a list of what to do , that would save...
^^^^
Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble especially if someone have a list of what to do , that would save us alot of ...
^^
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ly if someone have a list of what to do , that would save us alot of time to enjo...
^^
Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in our life. For example, when I was in college , I used to make a schedule of m...
^^
Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ife. For example, when I was in college , I used to make a schedule of my daily d...
^^
Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ed to make a schedule of my daily duties , such as going to college in the morning...
^^
Line 5, column 718, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f my friends who do not like to do plans a head of time, they always complain of ...
^^
Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ot only enable us to fullfill our dreams , but also made our life much more easier...
^^
Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ur dreams , but also made our life much more easier. We should all have plans with good org...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l have plans with good organization.
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example', 'such as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206148282098 0.220444632235 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.164556962025 0.167888034529 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0940325497288 0.0606518309736 155% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0506329113924 0.0506257000042 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0831826401447 0.118615021944 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112115732369 0.107062808482 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0506329113924 0.041066498444 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65083500322 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0415913200723 0.0385302599488 108% => OK
Particles: 0.00180831826401 0.00132118243153 137% => OK
Determiners: 0.0723327305606 0.0714148451538 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0108499095841 0.0191574576366 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0235081374322 0.00930345855455 253% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2879.0 1141.60824742 252% => OK
No of words: 511.0 206.134020619 248% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63405088063 5.53046319177 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 3.78085437643 126% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.297455968689 0.284621296913 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.219178082192 0.211203875043 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148727984344 0.133321485273 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101761252446 0.0843313296314 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65083500322 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 127.690721649 193% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481409001957 0.622163163488 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.2620696812 62.8969750728 89% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 12.9587628866 147% => OK
Sentence length: 26.8947368421 16.4300151701 164% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.3331265002 44.7399317507 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.526315789 90.9928171075 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8947368421 16.4300151701 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.526315789474 0.613754768223 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 2.09278350515 1003% => OK
Readability: 48.8125450613 37.5504026743 130% => OK
Elegance: 1.23636363636 1.13073093955 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35562741384 0.331212695627 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.135394299858 0.0927372745006 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0891801876329 0.0736520305886 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.505259561124 0.579516596996 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176128647434 0.180689518051 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140292374643 0.122183219658 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900212462256 0.0765303033291 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.445783390896 0.211926503985 210% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0632004243768 0.0737400523855 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259584863301 0.203819188451 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892359956932 0.067151250289 133% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.45360824742 188% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.48453608247 202% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.0206185567 50% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 4.73195876289 254% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 1.03092783505 291% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 8.32989690722 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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