Some people say that Internet is the most important invention. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, technology has dominated almost all aspects of human’s lives and scientists and researchers could access great achievements using this invention. It is believed by a group of people that Internet is the most important invention and I totally agree with this idea.
There are a variety of reasons why I would argue the World Wide Web and Internet could make a revolution in people’s lives. Firstly, by expansion of Internet the world turns into a small village in which people can communicate easily apart from their place of living and their locations. It could change the business into a global trade and consequently, the business market is now more competitive and it improves the economy of nations. Secondly, Internet makes the online shopping more popular and the majority of people in mega cities are now interested in ordering their products via internet. Finally, students can enroll in virtual universities and attend online classes while they access the world class libraries.
On the other hand, the invention of internet had some adverse effects on individuals’ lifestyle. It is apparent that people do less physical activities and they follow a sedentary lifestyle which is a threat to their health. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that more than 30% of children in Britain suffer obesity which is a result of sedentary lifestyle. In this research they realized that children are more interested in playing online games than playing with their peers. Furthermore, there are more online crimes such as frauds, embezzlement and terrorist attacks.
In conclusion, although this invention had some detrimental impacts in people’s life, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Not only the quality of people’s life is affected, but also it leads to more scientific inventions in a variety of industries such as aviation, health and food.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34951456311 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97856665576 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57928802589 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3256999462 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.071428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164111433457 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058771925269 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658076672018 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101710671348 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454286449523 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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