The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library manager, in your letter, include
- A brief introduction of yourself
- Your experience and relevant skills
- Why you want the job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in relation to the advertisement placed in the college notice board for a part time assistant to work in the library during summer vacation for a small payment. I have been pursuing Graduate program in Library Science in your school and available for work.
During the last summer break, I had volunteered in my community library assisting the librarian and organized story telling sessions to the less privileged children in a nearby slum. Being a student of library science, I possess outstanding skills in book-keeping and restoration of old books.
This job is very important for me, not only for financial benefit, but also to gain invaluable experience in managing a library. Moreover, I am interested to take up voluntary work which will benefit the community. In addition to that, doing some part-time job will help boost my confidence level and give me a sense of individuality and independence. I have attached my resume for your kind consideration.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Kiran Attaluri
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...laced in the college notice board for a part time assistant to work in the library during...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14204545455 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98385267864 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8710497392 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2450319926 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847533463268 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462528693448 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116689050421 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543772013439 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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