The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library manager, in your letter, include
- A brief introduction of yourself
- Your experience and relevant skills
- Why you want the job
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my interest in applying for library job at library during summer holidays.
Firstly, I would wish to mention tha I studied in the same school; so, it would be honor for me to serve in library section. Briefing about my qualifications, I am a graduate in Arts field, and show deep interest in reading and exploring the world of books. The library job will aid in my portfolio, helping me for future endeavors.
Although this would be my first paid-job, I have some experience of voluntary work while studying at college, which includes 6 months assignment as a library assistant in Gandhi library, Vadodara. I learned library management, analytical and cognitive skills with this post. Despite being a fresher to join the library, I assure you giving best for the organisation
Enclosed is the detail resume, stating my academic and personal achievements for your kind reference. I would find myself grateful if I get this opportunity as the school-library is popular in the city, giving me myriad learning and experience.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12834224599 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9243857132 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663101604278 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9340846945 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262809327897 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100302448613 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535386655363 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134852153023 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064981078309 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.