In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The countries enforce smoking laws to prohibit smoking in public areas. In this case, the people who want to smoke should satisfy their desire in isolation and not socially. In my opinion, I strongly agree that it is correct to forbid people from smoking in public areas due to its negative effects on other people.
The foremost reason for implementing smoking law in the country is to save the passive smokers from its hazards. If the people smoke in public, then others who inhale this smoke also gets affected and that may lead to many cardio-vascular and respiratory diseases. As the smoking person puts the life of other people also in trouble, so smoking should always be done in private places or smoking zones. For example, research has shown that secondary smokers have higher risk of heart failure than the main smoker
Another reason for restricting smoking in public is to protect the young generation from getting addicted to smoking habit. A child is immature to understand the repercussions of smoking and may imitate the act when he sees elders doing the same. Apparently, they set a bad example to others, particularly to the teenagers and indirectly encourage them to follow their footpath. Therefore, such law is good to protect the children and adolescents from indulging into smoking.
Finally, the restriction will compel the smoker to think about its ill-effects and the reason for making it forbidden in the public place. In other words, the smoker would realise that he should not smoke as it is harmful to the society. Hence, such restrictions may encourage smokers to come out of their addiction and live a healthy life.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that smoking in public is harmful as it affects the health of other people and spoils the young generation to get into the addiction. Moreover, such laws to prevent smoking in public can prove inspiring for people to get rid of this habit. Thus, every country should have a law to stop people from smoking in public.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92352941176 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5726536325 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523529411765 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5964194421 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298993862607 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115642564376 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671906609234 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186245809114 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625316604085 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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