Write a letter to your friend asking him help to create a website

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your friend asking him help to create a website.

Dear John,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and great spirits. I came to know that you have learned website designing course; so, thought to ask your favor in creating website for my business.

As you know, I run a shop that sells ready-made garments for all age-groups. Notwithstanding the fact that the shop is two decades old; as people started shopping online, the in-store selling is debilitating day by day. Undeniably, to survive in market and compete with other sellers', it is the right time to get my business take a leap in technology. Therefore, I am planning to modernize the trade by having an e-commerce site that can showcase my items with its price tags, easing customers' convenience to watch and purchase. As you are software professional and completed training on website development, I am sure you can help me in this area.

Admittedly, good design and easy buying on website would certainly prosper my business. Let me know if we can meet this weekend and discuss on the business-requirement. I will also take you to my shop, showing you different varieties and make you aware of the stock that I sale.

It would be great if you could come with your family. This way we can have family time together along with discussing business.

I look forward hearing from you soon.

Yours lovingly,

XYZ

Votes
Average: 5 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93013100437 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87117156756 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646288209607 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3736088613 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6428571429 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0703428362331 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281527671231 0.0766984524023 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428668505468 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0391087448777 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053095470175 0.0580467560999 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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