You want to apply for the following job. Write a letter to Mrs. Keller Describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job,Advertisement: Housekeeper required for a private home. Experience is required.

Dear Mrs.Keller,

Hope this letter finds you hale and healthy. I am writing this letter to express my interest for the position of Housekeeper for a private home. Currently, I am working as a housekeeper for a renowned hotel at Ontario serving 200 people each day. Also, I own responsibility for the following house-keeping activities such as cleaning the rooms, bathrooms as well as guest houses attached to the private home.

I have an overall experience of 30 years in the field of house-keeping and have played various roles throughout my career. Cooking, Painting and gardening are my other passions that adds value to my position. I can also manage people and other valuable resources effectively as I manage 50 people now. Hence, I am confident that this job is appropriate for me. Please find attached resume for your reference and feel free to call me for any other information needed. Looking forward for your positive response.

Yours sincerely,
ZARA

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Keller
Dear Mrs.Keller, Hope this letter finds you hale and...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, look, so, well, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 26.3917525773 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08125 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92937039951 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66875 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8322083271 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9090909091 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303965738332 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108090811007 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809613784877 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219443697799 0.12726935374 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535656731253 0.0580467560999 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.