Disadvantage of technology on the health
Technology is now a big part of society and our future life. There is a small majority of people that wish to live without technology, and luckily, it is still advancing at a rate that has helped stave off stagnation. Technology changed many thing in the world and It also bring to dangerous issue need to solve. Nobody would against the development of technologies in any sector but it should be in a positive way and it shouldn’t have any negative impact on future generation. This essay will analyse the disadvantages of technology about health’s people.
Have many issue exist in our life when technology develop day after day. There is no doubt that advances in medical technology saves lives. An increasingly sophisticated health technology does not come cheap. So, the main disadvantage of technology on the health is the health care costs is rising in different way involve directly to develop technology. The growing health care costs has been attributed to different issues, for explain, high and rising costs are created by forces external to the health system, the weakness of a competitive free market within the health system, rapid diffusion of new technologies. Tests using new technologies are sometimes more expensive rather than less. Over a long period of time, new medical technology has always been on the forefront driver in increasing the health care costs and other charges like medicines cost. Moreover, applications of new technologies in equipment and therapy for patient as use some of the new technologies like many vaccines or modern machine can increase health care cost. While growing technology is very fast, people need pay for services and change of technology.
Technology also have affect to future and it was dangerous when technology equipment became popular in social. People almost spend time on internet or smartphone in day. It has directly affect to people’s eyes, especially children and sometime, it is cause to make an accident when they use mobile-phone in driving car. Many accidents occur in each nation involve technology. It often appears warning on newspaper, magazine… every day. Since the Technology develop most people had near sightedness because of looking on phone, computer too much can cause myopic, eye strain. Moreover, Dangerous brain cause by using too much time on social network, surf web … game. Brain have many part, but surfing too much on Facebook, or playing too much game can make the entertainment part to overload and cause us to full brain stop. Age limit until 12 years old can use phone, computer, that will have children brain develop better. Long hours in front of the computer could reduce children's ability in thinking.
Finally, when people use a lot of time on mobile-phone or laptop, it also causes many diseases as sleepless, obesity, infertility… It will decrease our health and people become dependent on technology. The more advanced society becomes technologically, the more people begin to depend on computers and other forms of technology for everyday existence. Nowadays people connect to use by many wireless device as Bluetooth, Wi-Fi when putting phone on your pocket or bag can cause infertility, the sound and electromagnetic waves may affect seriousness for health. A few people spent time for entertainment on phone or laptop therefore, they don’t have enough sleep to work and study in next day. In addition, most younger people use a lot of time for game and application on computer so, they don’t have time for rest and activity. They will easy obesity and reduce ability to think. If this become popular in social, it will destroy generation our future.
In conclusion, there is some disadvantage of technology on the health. In today's world, where just about everything is more convenient and accessible due to advances in technology across almost all sectors. The world changed when technology appears to serve people but it also effects to health’s people. It affects direct to quality and value in life. Moreover, it may destroy our lives when it still has many serious issue exists in social. Technology develop day by day so It will bring more unfavorable for people in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 92.0 52.1666666667 176% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3543.0 1977.66487455 179% => OK
No of words: 690.0 407.700716846 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1347826087 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.12521717326 4.48103885553 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84694827346 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 327.0 212.727598566 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473913043478 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1141.2 618.680645161 184% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.6003584229 180% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0822536688 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7567567568 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6486486486 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.97297297297 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.85842293907 415% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351351470099 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104322368233 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142763463055 0.0737576698707 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23692119442 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148037954015 0.0645574589148 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 86.8835125448 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.4 Out of 6.0
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