43 The following appeared in a memorandum written by the chairperson of the West Egg Town Council.
"Two years ago, consultants predicted that West Egg's landfill, which is used for garbage disposal, would be completely filled within five years. During the past two years, however, the town's residents have been recycling twice as much material as they did in previous years. Next month the amount of recycled material—which includes paper, plastic, and metal—should further increase, since charges for pickup of other household garbage will double. Furthermore, over 90 percent of the respondents to a recent survey said that they would do more recycling in the future. Because of our town's strong commitment to recycling, the available space in our landfill should last for considerably longer than predicted."
The argument presented that the West Egg's landfill would last for a more period of time then the intially pedicted is fallacious because it make certain crucial assumptions without any concrete evidence or facts and based on the assumption we can definately confirm whether the given statement is true , event such as that the amount of the recycling material will doubled on the assumption of the pick up chagers .
firstly we must understand that the counsultants which predicted the timeline of the landfill these are not any goverement authorised agency . any data is not clearly mentioned about them so they could favour various different agency such as the cleaning agency which would be eventually be hired to seperate the recycling dump and hazard dump and so on .its been also mentioned that the resident have shown responce and they have recycled twice the number of garbage they did in previous years but this data could be fallacious as there is no mentions to the source of the information .
futhermore in way is good to our that people become aware of there responsibility in terms of garbage disposal and help civics of the society but over here there is a percentage statics which says some over 90 percent in a survey would do recycling and on this assumtion more assumtion were made without question about the respondent the surveyor or the number of respondent to which the statics was based . it is worth exploring it can a case where only 10 people for surveyed for an city population on this basis the number was reported or could be the case were the surveyor and their tems they themselve became respondents and played the role of the citized and bases on this drafted the report.
lastly whatever might be case we must understand is high time where we must responsibility for our actions and stop treating our mother earh like a land fills which some day will eventually will become full if we dont stop treating her this way .
To conclude the assumtion ththe at the landfills will last more then the amount of time predicted is logicall inconvincing due to numerous assumption made in the argument and without conserdring the source or the credibility of the agency involved in making this decision and the surveys and so whole argument is inconvincing.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The argument presented that the West Egg's landfill would last for a more period of time then the intially pedicted is fallacious because it make certain crucial assumptions without any concrete evidence or facts and based on the assumption we can definately confirm whether the given statement is true , event such as that the amount of the recycling material will doubled on the assumption of the pick up chagers .
Error: pedicted Suggestion: predicted
Error: chagers Suggestion: chasers
Error: intially Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: definately Suggestion: definitely
Sentence: firstly we must understand that the counsultants which predicted the timeline of the landfill these are not any goverement authorised agency . any data is not clearly mentioned about them so they could favour various different agency such as the cleaning agency which would be eventually be hired to seperate the recycling dump and hazard dump and so on .its been also mentioned that the resident have shown responce and they have recycled twice the number of garbage they did in previous years but
Error: goverement Suggestion: government
Error: seperate Suggestion: separate
Error: counsultants Suggestion: consultants
Error: timeline Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: favour Suggestion: favor
Error: responce Suggestion: response
Error: authorised Suggestion: authorized
Sentence: futhermore in way is good to our that people become aware of there responsibility in terms of garbage disposal and help civics of the society but over here there is a percentage statics which says some over 90 percent in a survey would do recycling and on this assumtion more assumtion were made without question about the respondent the surveyor or the number of respondent to which the statics was based . it is worth exploring it can a case where only 10 people for surveyed for an city
Error: assumtion Suggestion: assumption
Error: statics Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: futhermore Suggestion: furthermore
Sentence: population on this basis the number was reported or could be the case were the surveyor and their tems they themselve became respondents and played the role of the citized and bases on this drafted the report.
Error: citized Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: tems Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: themselve Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: lastly whatever might be case we must understand is high time where we must responsibility for our actions and stop treating our mother earh like a land fills which some day will eventually will become full if we dont stop treating her this way .
Error: earh Suggestion: ear
Sentence: To conclude the assumtion ththe at the landfills will last more then the amount of time predicted is logicall inconvincing due to numerous assumption made in the argument and without conserdring the source or the credibility of the agency involved in making this decision and the surveys and so whole argument is inconvincing.
Error: ththe Suggestion: three
Error: assumtion Suggestion: assumption
Error: logicall Suggestion: logical
Error: conserdring Suggestion: conserving
Error: inconvincing Suggestion: No alternate word
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 23 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 390 350
No. of Characters: 1874 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.444 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.805 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.615 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 124 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 55.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 24.01 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.441 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.83 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...est Eggs landfill would last for a more period of time then the intially pedicted is fallaciou...
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Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ially pedicted is fallacious because it make certain crucial assumptions without any...
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Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...firm whether the given statement is true , event such as that the amount of the re...
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Line 1, column 351, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...such as that the amount of the recycling material will doubled on the assumption ...
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Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'double'
Suggestion: double
... amount of the recycling material will doubled on the assumption of the pick up chager...
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Line 1, column 415, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...on the assumption of the pick up chagers . firstly we must understand t...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e assumption of the pick up chagers . firstly we must understand that the coun...
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Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...ion of the pick up chagers . firstly we must understand that the counsultant...
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Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he landfill these are not any goverement authorised agency . any data is not clea...
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Line 2, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...re not any goverement authorised agency . any data is not clearly mentioned about...
^^
Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Any
...not any goverement authorised agency . any data is not clearly mentioned about the...
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Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...recycling dump and hazard dump and so on .its been also mentioned that the residen...
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Line 2, column 543, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no mentions'?
Suggestion: there are no mentions
...rs but this data could be fallacious as there is no mentions to the source of the information . ...
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Line 2, column 596, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...entions to the source of the information . futhermore in way is good to our...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ns to the source of the information . futhermore in way is good to our that pe...
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Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Futhermore
... the source of the information . futhermore in way is good to our that people becom...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...espondent to which the statics was based . it is worth exploring it can a case whe...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ondent to which the statics was based . it is worth exploring it can a case where ...
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Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e where only 10 people for surveyed for an city population on this basis the numbe...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and bases on this drafted the report. lastly whatever might be case we must un...
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Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
...is drafted the report. lastly whatever might be case we must understa...
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Line 4, column 229, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... will eventually will become full if we dont stop treating her this way ...
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Line 4, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll if we dont stop treating her this way To conclude the assumtion ththe at the l...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...n ththe at the landfills will last more then the amount of time predicted is logical...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 2260.96107784 84% => OK
No of words: 390.0 441.139720559 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84358974359 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64126474296 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 204.123752495 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505128205128 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 22.8473053892 284% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.772795925 57.8364921388 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 314.833333333 119.503703932 263% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.0 23.324526521 279% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.70786347227 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.25449101796 457% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108667667293 0.218282227539 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539725968616 0.0743258471296 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0137107734706 0.0701772020484 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548918273828 0.128457276422 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235380169649 0.0628817314937 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.9 14.3799401198 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 48.3550499002 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 12.197005988 225% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.68 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.32208582834 124% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.0 11.1389221557 251% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.9071856287 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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