According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year , fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year.And yet the percentage of positive reviews about specific Super Screen movies have increased in this year.Clearly,the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough to our prospective viewers.Thus the problem lies not in the quality of our movies but with the lack of awareness that good movies are available.Super Screen Movies should thus allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching public through advertising.
In the given the argument, advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production suggests to allocate more budget to advertising so that it can earn more profit . For strengthen his/her (strengthening this argument) stand, specific reasons are also given . Althiugh these reasons seem true, but by scrunitizing the reasons, it can be infered that the reasons are based on the assumptions which are specious . Reasoning behind my stand are as follows:
Firstly, in the starting (in the beginning) of the memo, a report is considered as a base which states the fewer people attended the movies of the production house . Here the statistics are not specified in the argument so that just one word "fewer" is not strong enough to infer that the viewers have significantly decreased . Same argument can be made for the furhter statement which states that the percentage has increased. Moreover, the credibility of the report is also not specifically given . Thus, the base of the argument on which whole argument is made is not strong enough to lead to any conclusion .
Secondly, if we assume that the credibility of the report is good, the statistics are also in the kind manner that there must be taken steps to mollify (wrong usage) the result than also further reasoning is not strong enough . It stated that problem lies within the lack of awareness of good quality movies . This argument is based on the assumption that more the awareness towards the movies, more profit will be earned . Although, it sounds music to the argument, it is not always true . The profit of the movie also depends various other factors too like the core subject of the movie, starcast (add hyphen) of the movie and more importantly, the way whole story is narrated to the public . Thus, there is no guarantee that by increasing the budget, profit will definitely increased .
Moreover, it can be possible that by writing this letter, intention of the advertising director is to earn profit by proving that more investment would be good for the production company . Although, it can not be definitely infered but if we wear another specs to read the argument, it sounds plausible . As there is not any single statement that is not pointing out that the investment should be increased .
Thus, by conclusing the whole argument, it can be said that the advertising director have not given specific reasons which are not based on any assumption and which is concrete enough to not to ignore . So, production company must do the furhter study to check the credibility of the memo before allocating more budget blindly .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: suggests allocating
...or of the Super Screen Movie Production suggests to allocate more budget to advertising so that it c...
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...ertising so that it can earn more profit . For strengthen his/her (strengthening t...
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...) stand, specific reasons are also given . Althiugh these reasons seem true, but b...
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...ed on the assumptions which are specious . Reasoning behind my stand are as follow...
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...ended the movies of the production house . Here the statistics are not specified i...
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...the viewers have significantly decreased . Same argument can be made for the furht...
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...o further reasoning is not strong enough . It stated that problem lies within the ...
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...lack of awareness of good quality movies . This argument is based on the assumptio...
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...s the movies, more profit will be earned . Although, it sounds music to the argume...
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...c to the argument, it is not always true . The profit of the movie also depends va...
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...ay whole story is narrated to the public . Thus, there is no guarantee that by inc...
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...sing the budget, profit will definitely increased . Moreover, it can be possible that ...
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...budget, profit will definitely increased . Moreover, it can be possible that by...
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...would be good for the production company . Although, it can not be definitely infe...
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...o read the argument, it sounds plausible . As there is not any single statement th...
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...hich is concrete enough to not to ignore . So, production company must do the furh...
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...mo before allocating more budget blindly .
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211934156379 0.25644967241 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.183127572016 0.15541462614 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0617283950617 0.0836205057962 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0843621399177 0.0520304965353 162% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0246913580247 0.0272364105082 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119341563786 0.125424944231 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0617283950617 0.0416121511921 148% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70760578773 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0267489711934 0.026700313972 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00205761316872 0.001811407834 114% => OK
Determiners: 0.123456790123 0.113004496875 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0246913580247 0.0255425247493 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0144032921811 0.0127820249294 113% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2606.0 2731.13054187 95% => OK
No of words: 452.0 446.07635468 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76548672566 6.12365571057 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.57801047555 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336283185841 0.378187486979 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243362831858 0.287650121315 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.179203539823 0.208842608468 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12610619469 0.135150697306 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70760578773 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 207.018472906 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41814159292 0.469332199767 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.8557813637 52.1807786196 88% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.039408867 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.7894736842 23.2022227129 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6364065297 57.7814097925 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.157894737 141.986410481 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7894736842 23.2022227129 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.724660767414 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 3.58251231527 586% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.1257568701 51.9672348444 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.34507042254 1.8405768891 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259051888815 0.441005458295 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132561363491 0.135418324435 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0580306034422 0.0829849096947 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.59452719211 0.58762219726 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140563169159 0.147661913831 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11750671995 0.193483328276 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605042229781 0.0970749176394 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.511276012417 0.42659136922 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.108390559978 0.0774707102158 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177072515466 0.312017818177 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607369355854 0.0698173142475 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.33743842365 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.87684729064 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 6.46551724138 124% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 5.36822660099 93% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 14.657635468 109% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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