According to a recent study, professional bodybuilders who used Train & Gain, a new protein supplement, over the course of three months experienced an increase in measured strength of up to 20%. Since Train & Gain is now available without prescription at

By the way i did this under exam conditions, so i apologise for the spelling errors. i didnt give my self enough time to proof read and i got some serious issues with spelling

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Sentence: The authors argument is extremely falwed and based on several assumption which need to be addressed before any adequate conclusion can be reached.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to authors and argument

Sentence: As mentioned previously the authors argument is heavily flawed, with a variety of assumptions which could mislead the average gym user about the quality of the product.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to authors and argument

Sentence: With out data on how the study was carried out, who the average user is, the mean, median and minimum strength increase, the argument will remain flawed and look like a misleading advertising campaign. if these issues were sesolved it could well stregthen the authors argument.
Description: The tag a WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by the
Suggestion: Refer to who and the
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to authors and argument

Sentence: The author has come to the conclusion that since train and gain is now more available in pharmacies that superior results from training will be no longer limited to profesional atheletes.
Error: atheletes Suggestion: athletes
Error: profesional Suggestion: professional

Sentence: The authors argument is extremely falwed and based on several assumption which need to be addressed before any adequate conclusion can be reached.
Error: falwed Suggestion: flawed

Sentence: the first flaw in the authors argument is the assumption that there are no other factors that contributed to the 20 increase in strength of the profesional body builders. profesional body builders may be on a variety of supplements while they train and these may have also accounted for or contributed to the 20 increase in strength.
Error: profesional Suggestion: professional

Sentence: With out these extra supplements the average user may not be able to attain the proffesional level of performance in such a short space of time. the profesional body builder may also be experiencing a placebo effect and because they anticipate an increase in strength they may change their training regime to be able to lift heavier weights and may be psychologically be able to lift more.
Error: proffesional Suggestion: professional
Error: profesional Suggestion: professional

Sentence: To strengthen the initail claim of the 20 increase in strength the author would need to present data on how the actual test was conducted with figures on how many people used a placebo supplement, what other supplements were used and their current and final strength
Error: initail Suggestion: initial

Sentence: This premise infers that it was not widely avialable before it was available on prescription.
Error: avialable Suggestion: available

Sentence: It would be logical to say that the body builders were able to purchase Train and gain previously with out a prescription so it would have being available to the general public. if this was the case the average gym enthusaite would have had access as well and would have already being able to achieve the claimed 'up to 20' increase.
Error: enthusaite Suggestion: enthusiasm

Sentence: With out knowing the products previous distribution it would be impossible to know how likely the average gym ethusiate would have used the product.
Error: ethusiate Suggestion: enthusiasm

Sentence: Such a claim is misleading because many users may have only experienced a 5 increase which may be know where near to putting them in the catergory of 'profesional level of performance'.
Error: profesional Suggestion: professional
Error: catergory Suggestion: category

Sentence: The author also assumes that the average gym ethusiate is not far off in performace from the proffesionals and even if the up to 20 increase in strenghth was true and most people achieved this it may not take them to a profesional level of performance.
Error: strenghth Suggestion: strength
Error: ethusiate Suggestion: enthusiasm
Error: profesional Suggestion: professional
Error: proffesionals Suggestion: professionals
Error: performace Suggestion: performance

Sentence: With out data on how the study was carried out, who the average user is, the mean, median and minimum strength increase, the argument will remain flawed and look like a misleading advertising campaign. if these issues were sesolved it could well stregthen the authors argument.
Error: sesolved Suggestion: resolved
Error: stregthen Suggestion: strengthen

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 19 2

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Always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 19 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 529 350
No. of Characters: 2549 1500
No. of Different Words: 211 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.796 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.819 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.716 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 175 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 145 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 95 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 58 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 37.786 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.405 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.391 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.661 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.159 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5