An ancient, traditional remedy for insomnia - the scent of lavender flowers - has now been proved effective. In a recent study, 30 volunteers with chronic insomnia slept each night for three weeks on lavender-scented pillows in a controlled room where their sleep was monitored electronically. During the first week, volunteers continued to take their usual sleeping medication. They slept soundly but wakened feeling tired. At the beginning of the second week, the volunteers discontinued their sleeping medication. During that week, they slept less soundly than the previous week and felt even more tired. During the third week, the volunteers slept longer and more soundly than in the previous two weeks. Therefore, the study proves that lavender cures insomnia within a short period of time.
The author claims here that the lavender flowers cures insomnia by analysing 30 volunteers who suffers from isomnia. Under some electronic monitoring system, those volunteers slept each night for three weeks on lavender-scanted pillows in those room. The author argues that during first week, by taking their sleeping medication, volunteers slept soundly but after waking up they felt tired. This way after completion of first week they started sleeping without taking any sleeping medication and they slept less soundly and felt more tired after waking up. This way, during the third week, they slept more soundly and longer compared to previous two weeks. This author's argument stated in this way, the argument distorts the view of the situation by providing week evidences and fails to mention several key factors, on the basis of which it could be evaluated. However, careful scrutiny of the evidence reveals that it provides little credible support for the author's conclusion. Hence, the argument can be considered unsubstantiated.
Here, as the author claimed that lavender pillow is enough to cure insomnia within short period of time by analysing only 30 volunteers. However, all homo sepiens have different capability and different cradibility to do work like someone can work only 8 hours per day whereas the other can do more than 10 hours per day. This way different people can take different lavel of sleep, the one who needs to sleep atleast 6 hours whereas other needs minimum 8 hours sleep to feel more fresh after sleeping. There may possibility that some people who suffered from insomnia has elergy from the smell of lavender flower, so he/she can't use that pillow. So we can't say that by using scant of lavender pillow, everyone can cure their insomnia.
Moreover, the author also said that the observation of volunteers is occured under electronic monitoring system which may lead problem and it may possible that that gadget didn't give accurate output about the observartion of volunteers. There may any technical error occured during the observation which may include any outliers in total analyse which results less accuracy in output.
In addition of the author's view which says that in first two weeks volunteers felt more tired but didn't give any such reason about what type of work they did before sleep rather then medication. So, without the accurate data we cant say
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 15 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 395 350
No. of Characters: 1977 1500
No. of Different Words: 200 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.458 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.005 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.463 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 137 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 101 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.235 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.921 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.765 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.33 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.523 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.168 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 659, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... longer compared to previous two weeks. This authors argument stated in this way, th...
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Line 1, column 963, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...rovides little credible support for the authors conclusion. Hence, the argument can be ...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...is enough to cure insomnia within short period of time by analysing only 30 volunteers. Howeve...
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Line 3, column 626, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...the smell of lavender flower, so he/she cant use that pillow. So we cant say that by...
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Line 3, column 626, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...the smell of lavender flower, so he/she cant use that pillow. So we cant say that by...
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Line 3, column 654, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
..., so he/she cant use that pillow. So we cant say that by using scant of lavender pil...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...em and it may possible that that gadget didnt give accurate output about the observar...
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Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... results less accuracy in output. In addition of the authors view which says that in ...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...wo weeks volunteers felt more tired but didnt give any such reason about what type of...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...pe of work they did before sleep rather then medication. So, without the accurate da...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ation. So, without the accurate data we cant say
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, third, whereas, in addition, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.6327345309 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 13.6137724551 140% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 28.8173652695 111% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 2260.96107784 89% => OK
No of words: 392.0 441.139720559 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14030612245 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50116460795 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 204.123752495 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533163265306 0.468620217663 114% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 705.55239521 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3830998193 57.8364921388 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.529411765 119.503703932 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0588235294 23.324526521 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 5.70786347227 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167109850372 0.218282227539 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646918837299 0.0743258471296 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754173305947 0.0701772020484 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828310752474 0.128457276422 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696968137215 0.0628817314937 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 98.500998004 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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