While the argument provides proper reason for significant decline in deer's population ,it significantly fails to assume other factors on which the habitat feed.
Arctic deer, a polar animal which primarily lives in arctic region need not to depend on plant for its survival.Nowhere,in his statement that the author mentioned that plant is the only food for deer.There might be some animals apart from deer that lives on arctic region can be prey for deer. In that case, the prey can be served as a secondary feed for deer.The author fails to valid, that plant is the only source of food which the deer rely upon.
Decline in population can be linked to any other factors apart from vegetation,might be the temperature have gone below the limits.In that case,the deer may unable to sustain in that temperature.It life would have been ceased.Or any endemic disease can also contribute for deer's population growth.The hunters might be unaware whether the deer has fallen into sick or any other device.The deer being in arctic regions may be less exposed to the any welfare organization. Otherwords, no such welfare organization can be seen in the areas of arctic region.Thus,due to lack of identification of disease the deer population might got decreased.
Another factor ,that author stated is the report that was obtained from the local hunters.The report was given in which time should be considered as the major factor .If the reports were given during summer,then the author's conclusion can be shattered in all possible directions.Because in summer,there is no chance that sea got frozen and that makes author's conclusion totally a illogical one.
The author finally concludes by saying,increase in global warming ,leads deer ,unable to follow their migration pattern across the sea which eventually makes it to live without food being the cause of significant reduction in population growth.Given that we dont know the answer to these questions ,the argument goes beyond the available data in asserting the above fact.
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 347 350
No. of Characters: 1659 1500
No. of Different Words: 182 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.316 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.781 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.418 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 49.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.395 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.857 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.488 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.873 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.185 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... significant decline in deers population ,it significantly fails to assume other f...
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Message: Did you mean 'depend'?
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...imarily lives in arctic region need not to depend on plant for its survival.Nowhere,in hi...
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...ed that plant is the only food for deer.There might be some animals apart from deer ...
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...nt is the only food for deer.There might be some animals apart from deer that liv...
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... be served as a secondary feed for deer.The author fails to valid, that plant is th...
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...perature.It life would have been ceased.Or any endemic disease can also contribut...
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...as fallen into sick or any other device.The deer being in arctic regions may be les...
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...hat was obtained from the local hunters.The report was given in which time should b...
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...should be considered as the major factor .If the reports were given during summer,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, second, so, then, thus, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 2260.96107784 76% => OK
No of words: 328.0 441.139720559 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21646341463 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98117575939 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557926829268 0.468620217663 119% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 22.8473053892 201% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.075863316 57.8364921388 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 244.428571429 119.503703932 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.8571428571 23.324526521 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.70786347227 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.25449101796 609% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16441366234 0.218282227539 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937641098294 0.0743258471296 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560914169198 0.0701772020484 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952732508484 0.128457276422 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628795862134 0.0628817314937 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 14.3799401198 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 48.3550499002 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 12.197005988 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.32208582834 120% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.1389221557 183% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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