In the passage the author talks about higer accident rates in Balmar Island due to increased number of population in summer. So author suggest to replicate the model used by neighbouring island Seaville to reduce the accidents by mopeds.
Since it is written in the first line that mopeds are popular mode of transportation but author no where talks about other modes of transportation in Balmar Island. It is also clear that accidents are always due to mistake of some person. Since it might be possible that mopeds accident are due to other's mistake and this thing is not been care of
Before taking any decision, a survey should be done about moped accident involving other vechichles.
In the next, author talks about limiting the number of rentals per day to control the accidents as it happened in Seaville island. But these things might rely on various other factors as well. The author doesn't account these factors in the decision that had been suggested. Accident might had been reduced in Seaville due to many other factor such as: number of tourist have been decreased, Traffic law has been imposed with the more impact then they were at the same time. Just copying their idea for balmar island isn't going to solve the problem. The author should look at the other factors as indicated.
There is no clear data in the argument about the population of Seville Island. The decision taken would also depend upon the population of difference between Seaville Islanad and Balmar Island. If they are more populated Island than balmar, limiting the moped rentals might work as this would effect more population of Island but if it is for small island than it won't effect the greater population, hence there is been less chances of decrement in accidents. Though author has written about similar limits in the argument but it is no clear data about what and how much these lmits are ?
Author also presumes that Seaville island limited moped in summer only.
The decision that author takes is assumed on various unstated things which could impost the great impact on the number of accidents. Author should survey data in more lucid manner and should state in the argument.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest replicating'.
Suggestion: suggest replicating
...mber of population in summer. So author suggest to replicate the model used by neighbouring island S...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...pular mode of transportation but author no where talks about other modes of transp...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mopeds'' or 'moped's'?
Suggestion: mopeds'; moped's
...person. Since it might be possible that mopeds accident are due to others mistake and ...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stake and this thing is not been care of Before taking any decision, a survey sho...
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Line 6, column 205, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...rious other factors as well. The author doesnt account these factors in the decision t...
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Line 6, column 442, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...w has been imposed with the more impact then they were at the same time. Just copyin...
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Line 6, column 517, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...st copying their idea for balmar island isnt going to solve the problem. The author ...
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Line 8, column 294, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... moped rentals might work as this would effect more population of Island but if it is ...
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Line 8, column 421, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...greater population, hence there is been less chances of decrement in accidents. Thou...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.283544303797 0.25644967241 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.151898734177 0.15541462614 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106329113924 0.0836205057962 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0278481012658 0.0520304965353 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0253164556962 0.0272364105082 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.159493670886 0.125424944231 127% => OK
Participles: 0.0582278481013 0.0416121511921 140% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.31888613716 2.79052419416 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.020253164557 0.026700313972 76% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0936708860759 0.113004496875 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0278481012658 0.0255425247493 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0177215189873 0.0127820249294 139% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2187.0 2731.13054187 80% => OK
No of words: 372.0 446.07635468 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87903225806 6.12365571057 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.57801047555 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362903225806 0.378187486979 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22311827957 0.287650121315 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.123655913978 0.208842608468 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0672043010753 0.135150697306 50% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.31888613716 2.79052419416 83% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 207.018472906 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470430107527 0.469332199767 100% => OK
Word variations: 49.3569331359 52.1807786196 95% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.039408867 90% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6666666667 23.2022227129 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2186263672 57.7814097925 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 141.986410481 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 23.2022227129 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.724660767414 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.14285714286 136% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.58251231527 251% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.9784946237 51.9672348444 83% => OK
Elegance: 2.44444444444 1.8405768891 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467376778877 0.441005458295 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111516445716 0.135418324435 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0637782981856 0.0829849096947 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.641132017142 0.58762219726 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174444628246 0.147661913831 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20571608279 0.193483328276 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992194392579 0.0970749176394 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.170924349244 0.42659136922 40% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.1186503434 0.0774707102158 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250823196721 0.312017818177 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138499176093 0.0698173142475 198% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.33743842365 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 6.87684729064 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 6.46551724138 31% => OK
Negative topic words: 12.0 5.36822660099 224% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 14.657635468 116% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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