The citizens of Rosyville have adopted more healthful lifestyles. Their responses to a recent survey show that today their eating habits are more closely aligned to government nutritional recommendations than they did fifteen years ago. Furthermore, there has been a fivefold increase in sales of food products containing glycose, a substance that a scientific study has shown reduces cholesterol. This trend is also evident in reduced sales of thrombin, a food that few of the healthiest citizens regularly eat.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
In given argument, Author had drawn conclusion that increase in fivefold sales in food product containing glycose, a substances that scientific study shown reduces cholestrol, this evident in reduced sales of thrombin, a food that few of the healthiest citizens reqularly eat. There are several unstated assumption made by author which need evidences. Before argument come in actual let us look in to the given argument.
Firstly, Author mention that the citizens of Rosyville have adopted more heathful lifestyles. In support author mention that their response to recent survey shows that today their habit are more closely alligned to government nutritional recommendation than they did fifteen years ago. Author made strong assumption that eating habit are aligned to government nutritional recommendation that they fifteen years ago. Author need to validate survey, whether the survey conducted by whole citizen of Rosyville. It might possiblity that out of 100000 citizen, survey conducted only of 20000 citizens. In an fifteen years, citizen eating habit might be different, because fifteen years ago there very less amount of restarent, but in today's date there are number of restaurent available. so people may not follow the eating habit.
Secondly, Author state that fivefold increase in sales of food product containing glycose, a substance that a scientific study has shown reduces cholestrol. Author made assumption that food product which containing glycose reduces cholestrol. Author need to statistical data about food product sale increase, whether all citizens of Rosyville buy food product. because it might possiblity, the requirement increase from nearly cities.
Thirdly, author support previous statement mention that trend is also evident sales of thrombin, a food that few healthiest citizens regularly eat. Author made strong assumption, those few healthiest citizen who regularly eat food have reduced sales of thrombin. It might possiblity that those few healthiest citizen maintain there physical fitness by various method exercise, eating less oily food. Author need to survey specifically to citizens who have cholestrol issue, who are really started to eat food, what about there cholestrol level.
To sum up with all, Before drawing any conclusion author need to take consideration in all point. There are several unstated assumtion made by author which need further evidences so the Argument become weak argument.
Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 12 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 371 350
No. of Characters: 2033 1500
No. of Different Words: 165 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.389 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.48 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.611 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 168 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 129 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.611 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.584 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.384 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.603 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.163 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a substance' or simply 'substances'?
Suggestion: a substance; substances
...les in food product containing glycose, a substances that scientific study shown reduces cho...
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Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
...qularly eat. There are several unstated assumption made by author which need evidences. Be...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on made by author which need evidences. Before argument come in actual let us look in ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'citizen' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'citizens'.
Suggestion: citizens
... It might possiblity that out of 100000 citizen, survey conducted only of 20000 citizen...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ey conducted only of 20000 citizens. In an fifteen years, citizen eating habit mig...
^^
Line 3, column 784, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ere are number of restaurent available. so people may not follow the eating habit....
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...citizens of Rosyville buy food product. because it might possiblity, the requirement in...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 11.1786427146 9% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 13.6137724551 154% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 16.3942115768 128% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 371.0 441.139720559 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6307277628 5.12650576532 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69165775478 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 204.123752495 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487870619946 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 705.55239521 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.9717230809 57.8364921388 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.45 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.55 23.324526521 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.70786347227 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257041163516 0.218282227539 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916478813658 0.0743258471296 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144185292328 0.0701772020484 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13385575783 0.128457276422 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.204668040664 0.0628817314937 325% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.3799401198 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.5979740519 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 98.500998004 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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