Collectors prize the ancient life-size clay statues of human figures made on Kali Island but have long wondered how the Kalinese artists were able to depict bodies with such realistic precision. Since archeologists have recently discovered molds of human heads and hands on Kali, we can now conclude that the ancient Kalinese artists used molds of actual bodies, not sculpting tools and techniques, to create these statues. This discovery explains why Kalinese miniature statues were abstract and entirely different in style: molds could only be used for life-size sculptures. It also explains why few ancient Kalinese sculpting tools have been found. In light of this development, collectors should expect the life-size sculptures to decrease in value and the miniatures to increase in value.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument in which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
We know that in today’s modern world, value of every product is based on its demand from the people. It is the simple economic market rule that follows universally. So if we need to know that whether the given prediction is right or wrong regarding value of two different sculptures, we need to ask survey the people that what do they like or demand more for their home or office, life size sculptures or miniature sculptures. Depending on that we can say that whose value is more. Like if more people likes life size ancient sculptures, then its value will increase. But if more people will prefer miniature ancient sculpture then its value will increase. Also we need to ask that which one is rare to find in this world of modern architect and techniques. Because whichever will be rare to find, people will want it more and hence its demand will surely increase.
Apart from surveying the demand of what people want we also need to see which of the two sculptures were more attractive and made with more finesse. Because for example, lets us say that miniature sculptures are more attractive than life size one but it is not rare or in demand, then even if more people wanted to have life size sculptures because of its rareness , but when they will see the beauty of miniature one they will want to have it no matter whether it is rare or not. That means value of miniature one will increase in that case.
Also we need to know that of what material both are made of. Because if one is made up of more costlier material or material which is rare to find nowadays , then its value will increase compare to other one.
We also need to know that which of one is in good condition and is more reliable to keep for few years. Because people will see that , if they are spending money on these items it should be more sustainable and in good condition then only they will buy it and its value will increase.
It can also happen that many people are fond of ancient stuff apart from its design, so we need to know that which belongs to much older period of time. Maybe its demand is more in case of some people who really likes to collect ancient stuff no matter of what design it is.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 404 350
No. of Characters: 1743 1500
No. of Different Words: 150 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.483 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.314 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.124 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 95 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.765 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.524 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.765 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.41 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.585 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.228 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... know that in today's modern world, value of every product is based on its d...
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Suggestion: Also,
...sculpture then its value will increase. Also we need to ask that which one is rare t...
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... need to see which of the two sculptures were more attractive and made with more...
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...two sculptures were more attractive and made with more finesse. Because for exam...
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...ore attractive than life size one but it is not rare or in demand, then even if ...
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...e but it is not rare or in demand, then even if more people wanted to have life ...
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Suggestion: ,
... size sculptures because of its rareness , but when they will see the beauty of mi...
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Suggestion: Also,
...ature one will increase in that case. Also we need to know that of what material b...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'costlier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: costlier
...e made of. Because if one is made up of more costlier material or material which is rare to f...
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... material which is rare to find nowadays , then its value will increase compare to...
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... few years. Because people will see that , if they are spending money on these ite...
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...o know that which belongs to much older period of time. Maybe its demand is more in case of so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, really, regarding, so, then, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.9520958084 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 13.6137724551 169% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 28.8173652695 177% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 404.0 441.139720559 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42079207921 5.12650576532 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23341928787 2.78398813304 80% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 204.123752495 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.386138613861 0.468620217663 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1450864218 57.8364921388 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.058823529 119.503703932 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7647058824 23.324526521 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 5.70786347227 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.20758483034 171% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0516982726524 0.218282227539 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0202091124662 0.0743258471296 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257502758253 0.0701772020484 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.033548477775 0.128457276422 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280957832771 0.0628817314937 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.3550499002 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.5979740519 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.32208582834 82% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 98.500998004 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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