The author’s argument remains flawed on various grounds. He quickly jumps to a conclusion without effectively substantiating his claims and leaves the reader with an argument lacking facts and figures. Certainly there is some merit to his argument which could be strengthened if he provided answers to some questions.
The author states that the council is concerned that the said county is becoming overdeveloped and the only way to prevent this is by limiting the supply of new housing. However, what are the details that have led the county to such assumption remain unanswered. Furthermore, e...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 543 350
No. of Characters: 2664 1500
No. of Different Words: 237 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.827 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.906 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.751 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 205 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 149 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.235 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.458 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.295 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.537 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.08 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 251, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... ten to fifteen years ago is too long a period of time to make any reasonable conclusions. A l...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, whereas, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.6327345309 158% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 55.5748502994 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2732.0 2260.96107784 121% => OK
No of words: 543.0 441.139720559 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03130755064 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.56307096286 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86754347337 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 204.123752495 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436464088398 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 869.4 705.55239521 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5247075499 57.8364921388 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 119.503703932 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 23.324526521 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.70786347227 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228024733924 0.218282227539 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618239706617 0.0743258471296 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692064567466 0.0701772020484 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114829130043 0.128457276422 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807129949016 0.0628817314937 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.3799401198 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 98.500998004 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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