The e-mail sent by marketing director of the Classical Shakespeare Theatre of Bardville suggests that initiation of 'Shakessphere in the Park' program during summer by Classical Shakespere Theatre productions would cause to increase their profits.They assumed this recomendation based on the Avon Repertory Company's establishment of 'Free Plays in the Park' which led to more profits .However, there are following three questions which are to be answered to evaluate the recomendation stated in the e-mail.
Firstly, do Classical Shakespere Theatre Productions company is comparable to Avon Repertory Company? In other words how can characteristics of one company can be taken into purpose to evaluate other company? Shakespere Theatre Productions company prematurely predicts that they might get profits if they do same which was done by Avon Repertory Company. Perhaps Avon Repertory Company might have located in a place where most people live and Shakespere Theatre Productions company might be located far away from people localities.Perhaps Shakespere Theatre Productions company's shows are outdated and are not enjoyable by audience.If the eiether of above scenarios has merit, then conclusion drawn in the original arugument can be significantly weakened.
Secondly, how much does 20 percent decline can attribute to? Here, Shakespere Theatre Productions company assumes that 20 percent decline is significant amount.Perhaps 20 percent of decline can be considered as less, If there were 2 million
audience before and 20 percent of 2 million audience would attribute less loss to the company. If this question is considered as merit then conclusion does not hold any water.
Finally, did Shakespere Theatre Productions company increased advertising? If so by how much amount did they increase advertising? Perhaps they had improved little amount of advertising that could not reach the number of advertisements of Avon Repertory Company.Perhaps advertisments are not being reached to audience.Perhaps these advertisements are not properly attracting the people. If this case is considered the argument can be weakend.
In conclusion,the argument,as it stands now,is considerably flawed due to its reliance on several unwarranted assumptions. If the author is able to answer tha above three questions and offer more evidence , then it will e possible to evaluate the possibility of the recommendation that 'Shakespeare in the Park' program would increase profits for Shakespere Theatre Productions company.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 382 350
No. of Characters: 2100 1500
No. of Different Words: 180 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.421 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.497 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.046 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 167 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 149 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 94 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 68 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.516 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.812 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.358 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.642 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.126 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increasing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: increasing
...kespere Theatre productions would cause to increase their profits.They assumed this recomen...
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Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...s would cause to increase their profits.They assumed this recomendation based on the...
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Line 1, column 380, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ys in the Park which led to more profits .However, there are following three quest...
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Line 1, column 382, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
... in the Park which led to more profits .However, there are following three questions wh...
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Line 4, column 532, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Perhaps
...located far away from people localities.Perhaps Shakespere Theatre Productions companys...
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Line 4, column 633, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...dated and are not enjoyable by audience.If the eiether of above scenarios has meri...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...nificantly weakened. Secondly, how much does 20 percent decline can attribute t...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Perhaps
...0 percent decline is significant amount.Perhaps 20 percent of decline can be considered...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Audience
...red as less, If there were 2 million audience before and 20 percent of 2 million audi...
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Line 12, column 263, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Perhaps
...dvertisements of Avon Repertory Company.Perhaps advertisments are not being reached to ...
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Line 12, column 319, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Perhaps
...ments are not being reached to audience.Perhaps these advertisements are not properly a...
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Line 12, column 319, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ments are not being reached to audience.Perhaps these advertisements are not properly a...
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Line 12, column 388, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...are not properly attracting the people. If this case is considered the argument ca...
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Line 15, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ument can be weakend. In conclusion,the argument,as it stands now,is considerab...
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Line 15, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...weakend. In conclusion,the argument,as it stands now,is considerably flawed du...
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Line 15, column 44, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , is
...conclusion,the argument,as it stands now,is considerably flawed due to its reliance...
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Line 15, column 205, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... three questions and offer more evidence , then it will e possible to evaluate the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 2260.96107784 95% => OK
No of words: 373.0 441.139720559 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7855227882 5.12650576532 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31148194401 2.78398813304 119% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 204.123752495 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506702412869 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 705.55239521 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.70958083832 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 135.440795862 57.8364921388 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.142857143 119.503703932 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6428571429 23.324526521 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.70786347227 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209096325179 0.218282227539 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726642322584 0.0743258471296 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792538881339 0.0701772020484 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119921524728 0.128457276422 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775657473682 0.0628817314937 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 14.3799401198 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 48.3550499002 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.197005988 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.5979740519 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 98.500998004 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 12.3882235529 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.9071856287 168% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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