From the memorandum, the manager claims that the station should recover the time schedule for the news program as same as before the renovation. This is based on the complaint about the coverage of the weather and local news that the station received in that period and the canceled advertising contract with advertisers. This, however, lack some supportive evidence to be convincing.
Firstly, the manager claims this as he or she assumes that the less air time of the weather and local news brings about less coverage and consequently receives complaints. This cannot convince the reader to believe as the manager did not provide more information about the details of complaints and the number of it whether the number is shooting significantly or without significant after renovation time programs. If the station has received complaints like this before the renovation and the number is not different between and after adjusting air time, it cannot be concluded that the complaints are related to the renovation and that the manager's recommendation will result in a positive side.
Another thing is that the manager assumes that because of the decrease in local and weather news, the advertisers cancel the contract. This is another flaw in the assumption as the manager did not realize the timing of the contract. On the other hand, even if the manager's assumption is true, the increase in national news should bring another group of advertisers. Therefore, this seems to be lacking in reason.
In addition, the manager lacks in thinking of other possible reasons for the decrease in the late-night news program. Another possible explanation for this may be that another station just renovate the pattern of the program and this is fresher and more interesting than this station. Even if there is no adjusting in air time, the viewers may not watch this station as the present seems to be old-fashioned.
In conclusion, the manager's recommendation that the station should bring back the time schedule is not reason enough to apply as it lacks some convincing premise to support it.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 644, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'managers'' or 'manager's'?
Suggestion: managers'; manager's
... related to the renovation and that the managers recommendation will result in a positiv...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'managers'' or 'manager's'?
Suggestion: managers'; manager's
...ontract. On the other hand, even if the managers assumption is true, the increase in nat...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'managers'' or 'manager's'?
Suggestion: managers'; manager's
...be old-fashioned. In conclusion, the managers recommendation that the station should ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, another thing, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 343.0 441.139720559 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1195335277 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77597871931 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437317784257 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8607057978 57.8364921388 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.428571429 119.503703932 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 23.324526521 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 5.70786347227 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363015162969 0.218282227539 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137406634786 0.0743258471296 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654426559445 0.0701772020484 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213447702227 0.128457276422 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654088997009 0.0628817314937 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.3799401198 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 98.500998004 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 644, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'managers'' or 'manager's'?
Suggestion: managers'; manager's
... related to the renovation and that the managers recommendation will result in a positiv...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'managers'' or 'manager's'?
Suggestion: managers'; manager's
...ontract. On the other hand, even if the managers assumption is true, the increase in nat...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'managers'' or 'manager's'?
Suggestion: managers'; manager's
...be old-fashioned. In conclusion, the managers recommendation that the station should ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, another thing, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 343.0 441.139720559 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1195335277 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77597871931 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437317784257 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8607057978 57.8364921388 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.428571429 119.503703932 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 23.324526521 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 5.70786347227 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363015162969 0.218282227539 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137406634786 0.0743258471296 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654426559445 0.0701772020484 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213447702227 0.128457276422 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654088997009 0.0628817314937 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.3799401198 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 98.500998004 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.