The following recommendation from the board of directors of monarch book, author drawn conclusion that, opening cafe will allow Monarch to attract more customers and better compete with regel book,which recently opened its own cafe. There are several assumption made by author. before recommendation to come in exist look in to given argument.
Director of Monarch book recommend to open cafe in its store. Monarch having business at same location for more than twenty years and has large customer base because of it's known for its wide selection of book on all subject.The assumption is made by author, Opening cafe store attracted more customer. an survey or study done by author about customer requirement, whether they really prefer either tea or coffee at time of reading? There are several other thinks which may attract customer such as, discount for daily reader with one week of well published magazines available to read at freely.
Space could be made for cafe by discontinuing the children's book section which become less popular. space alloted for children's book is it sufficient for an cafe department.
most recent national census indicated a significant decline in the percentage of population under age ten. declination have no specific data means from 1000 to 100 or what.current scienrio shows decline in percentage of population below age group of ten, after certain years, situaion might be different so at that time space availablity insufficient for children's group.
lastly, author stated that opening a cafe will allow monarch to attract more customer and better compete with regal book, which recently opened its own cafe. Monarch book have famous from twenty years because of wide selection of book on all subject. Recently regal book start its own cafe, whether an one year before or two year before, we don't no. The author need to take survey of regal book who start cafe, and compare difference before and after.
To sum up with all, author need to take several points in to consideration before concluding.
e-rater score report
Sentence: Space could be made for cafe by discontinuing the children's book section which become less popular. space alloted for children's book is it sufficient for an cafe department. most recent national census indicated a significant decline in the percentage of population under age ten. declination have no specific data means from 1000 to 100 or what.current scienrio shows decline in percentage of population below age group of ten, after certain years, situaion might be different so at that time
Error: alloted Suggestion: allowed
Error: scienrio Suggestion: science
Error: situaion Suggestion: situation
Error: what.current Suggestion: what current
Error: discontinuing Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: space availablity insufficient for children's group.
Error: availablity Suggestion: availability
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 16 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 336 350
No. of Characters: 1673 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.281 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.979 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.562 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 119 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.545 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 21.5 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.545 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.42 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.685 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.114 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...omers and better compete with regel book,which recently opened its own cafe. There are...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'several assumptions'.
Suggestion: several assumptions
...recently opened its own cafe. There are several assumption made by author. before recommendation t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
... opened its own cafe. There are several assumption made by author. before recommendation t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 279, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Before
... are several assumption made by author. before recommendation to come in exist look in...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 279, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... are several assumption made by author. before recommendation to come in exist look in...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...s wide selection of book on all subject.The assumption is made by author, Opening c...
^^^
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: An
...ing cafe store attracted more customer. an survey or study done by author about cu...
^^
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ing cafe store attracted more customer. an survey or study done by author about cu...
^^
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Space
...book section which become less popular. space alloted for childrens book is it suffic...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...for childrens book is it sufficient for an cafe department. most recent national ...
^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
... it sufficient for an cafe department. most recent national census indicated a sign...
^^^^
Line 6, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Declination
...percentage of population under age ten. declination have no specific data means from 1000 t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 119, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...f population under age ten. declination have no specific data means from 1000 to 100...
^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
...y insufficient for childrens group. lastly, author stated that opening a cafe will...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 300, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... regal book start its own cafe, whether an one year before or two year before, we ...
^^
Line 8, column 342, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... one year before or two year before, we dont no. The author need to take survey of r...
^^^^
Line 10, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in to consideration before concluding.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, look, may, really, so, well, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.6327345309 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 55.5748502994 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 2260.96107784 76% => OK
No of words: 333.0 441.139720559 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15915915916 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60936251539 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 204.123752495 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.468620217663 119% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1330069454 57.8364921388 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 119.503703932 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 23.324526521 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.70786347227 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432401096537 0.218282227539 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150438020056 0.0743258471296 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163751078341 0.0701772020484 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200784928785 0.128457276422 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163476612965 0.0628817314937 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 98.500998004 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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